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walker
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since 2001-02-11
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Florida

0 posted 2002-08-26 07:40 PM



A new poem I write
about an old topic,
my love
How many times have I whisphered
my love to the wind hoping
that it will touch you
and that you will find
the same love in your heart
Not surperficial love
not lust
but a love so pure and good that tears
would never know it
I can go on forever
loving you this way
but this pain that your love brings
stands like a shadow in my wind
making love you misery
Let my love in

© Copyright 2002 walker - All Rights Reserved
Mistletoe Angel
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1 posted 2002-08-26 08:06 PM




(big hugggssssss) Oh Walker, I know just how you feel, I too wish that you can openly reveal your love to him and let him understand how you truly feel happily! (sigh) My thoughts are with you, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Walker, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Miah
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since 2002-08-26
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2 posted 2002-09-14 05:22 PM


I can understand the pain of your words, I been there times before.  May you find all that you look for in love and in life.

Bill Charles
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3 posted 2002-09-14 05:44 PM


walker - sometimes they just don't seem to hear me thinks. Best to you, and perhaps these words will be heard...

BC

Duncan
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4 posted 2002-09-15 02:07 AM


but a love so pure and good that tears
would never know it
I can go on forever
loving you this way

walker, my friend...I have missed your heart.

Earth Angel
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5 posted 2002-09-15 07:42 PM


..."whispered my love to the wind"...

Oh, how painful that can be to a gentle and loving soul-- as you appear to be, with these words.

Take Care

Earth Angel


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6 posted 2002-09-16 05:36 PM


Love should always equally balance...take care!

Michael

the_loner_23
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7 posted 2002-09-16 05:37 PM


Very sad but a good write.

Cold hands means a warm heart

JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
8 posted 2002-09-17 10:09 PM


We can only try...James
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