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Mistletoe Angel
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0 posted 2002-08-26 07:36 PM


(Our dearest Joanna has been at Passions for 1 year now, Yay!!! This is for you, my love, who makes me feel so special everyday and believe in the power of love! )



Once Upon A Time
By: Noah Eaton
8/26/02

Once upon a time
I was lonely and in despair
I felt love could never find my way
Marauded by fates solitaire

Then last October
I smelled your loves sweet rose
In swear you're truly an angel
Falling to my arms in destinies cove

It feels just like a miracle
How God pit you into my world
And though we're miles apart
You always feel so close to me
I can almost feel your kiss everyday...

Once upon a time
You took my hand and showed me the way
At first I was nervous and scared I would fail you
But now your arms is the one place I want to stay

Many nights I cry thanking God you found me
Just staring at your sweet pictures, I feel sweet serendipity
At Cindrella's Castle I certainly wished upon a star
Wishing for you and me to join in loves matrimony...

It feels just like a miracle
How God pit you into my world
And though we're miles apart
You always feel so close to me
I can almost feel your kiss everyday...

When you're gone
I cry most of the time
Imagining you looking out your window in bed
Wondering if you think of me when the stars shine
I think of a future we can share
Hand in hand, two hearts as one
I only want to be with you
You're that special woman I want to love...

It feels just like a miracle
How God pit you into my world
And though we're miles apart
You always feel so close to me
I can almost feel your kiss everyday...

I want to be your sweetheart forever...
I want to be your man forever...
I want to be your sun and your moon
I want to hold your hand forever...
Joanna, I love you...





"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (08-26-2002 07:37 PM).]

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walker
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1 posted 2002-08-26 07:49 PM


So sweet and lovely, congratualtions, Joanna and to you of course
catalinamoon
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2 posted 2002-08-26 09:06 PM


I hope it happens just that way,too. Noah, if any man deserves his love dreams to be fulfilled, it is you.
Beautiful poem.
Sandra

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3 posted 2002-08-26 09:06 PM


Noah - a loving poem for Joanna on her One Year Anniversary in Passions. Well done & Congrats Joanna!!! Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Bill Charles
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4 posted 2002-08-26 11:24 PM


Noah - love has grabbed you, it is certain. Lovely romantic write...

BC

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5 posted 2002-08-27 02:49 AM


heh, Noah you little dog you! haha i must say even with lifes tradigys at my side, this poem brightend my heart even if it was just for a moment or two... Enjoyed

The man of few words...

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6 posted 2002-08-27 09:57 AM


enjoyed
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7 posted 2002-08-27 08:59 PM


yay, way to go both of you!!!

SS

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8 posted 2002-08-27 09:01 PM


This is so sweet

Cold hands means a warm heart

ShadowRider
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9 posted 2002-08-27 10:35 PM


Noah, my good Buddy, you will have to forgive me.  My computer uuurped right during your reply to this poem.  Dulcy and i have been putting it thru surgery just to get it going again. (bad DLL file...arrrg  *s*)

But what i said, i think, was:
Wishing you eternity in love with Joanna
and mannnnn is she pretty!  You both have
the look of innocence and right-spirits.
She will absolutely love this, Noah-Dude!
~owe ya a call soon, K?~
poetry from YOUR heart
is more precious than any jewel

jeff

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10 posted 2002-08-28 02:48 AM



Noah-
Very sweet write for Joanna.

Joanna...congratulations on your anniversary!

Hugs to you both,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

CSKpoet
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11 posted 2002-08-28 03:07 AM


Awwwww how very romantic and sweet...
Congrats to Joaana
and hugs and best wishes to you both

Cher

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

Zall
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12 posted 2002-08-28 09:31 AM


Great sentiment, full of heart and feeling,
Zall
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13 posted 2002-08-28 09:42 AM


Futhermore, congrats to you both. I sincerly hope it works out for you both. And if not you can always hang out with me and the others in the Dark Forum!

'emitting evil laugh'

Just kidding

Nice Work


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14 posted 2002-08-28 10:36 PM


Awwww Noah, this is a lovely love poem.
Earth Angel
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15 posted 2002-08-28 10:47 PM


Noah, you spread so much joy with your wonderful and encouraging comments to our poems. By the number of warm responses you have received so quickly after posting this poem, you know how much you yourself is loved.

What a beautiful tribute to your beautiful Joanna. Even when you're miles apart, your love for her fills your heart. Ahh, love!
Isn't it grand? Blessings to you both!

Love, Light & Laughter


Madame Chipmunk
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16 posted 2002-08-28 11:39 PM


Noah... congratulations to Joanna and also to you for writing this lovely tribute to her anniversary here...
Your love for her shines through every line...
~ warm hugs to both of you

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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