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Magnus
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0 posted 2002-08-26 04:22 PM


Typical....NOT!

Certainly not you...
Eyes that shine as bright as stars
Smile that is as large as the earth.
Looks that make one look twice...
Thoughts that ...well....  
Linger..

Typically you is who you are...
Unique, caring, compassionate and ever honest.
Loving all that is her world...
Loving all that is....simply all...

Wishing upon the moon
to carry the burdens of many...
Simply hoping to let us know...
She cares....cares and cares..
Some more...

That is who you are...
Our Sun...

© Copyright 2002 Barry J. Tackett - All Rights Reserved
EagleScorpion
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1 posted 2002-08-26 04:24 PM


this is sweet. a lovely poem of admiration and respect, acknowledgement of the One who truly cares, the bringer of all life
Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2002-08-26 10:48 PM




(big hugggssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is a beautiful dedication to our loving Son of God who will always guide us with innocent, timeless love! (sigh) I think you should consider posting in Spiritual, sweet friend, you write of His loving grace so well, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Madame Chipmunk
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3 posted 2002-08-26 10:56 PM


What a beautiful tribute to such a deserving light amongst us...
She does spread her sunshine all over these blue pages...
~ bright sunshiny hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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4 posted 2002-08-26 11:07 PM


Magnus darling boy this is truly one of your best. You do tributes about as well as you o romance, that is to say perfectly. Thai is certainly beautiful and fits the sun shiny one to a T.

I love it utterly utterly utterly. You really are a superb writer.


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the earthquake wind and fire

Decaflame
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5 posted 2002-08-27 06:42 AM



And never a typical write from you, either.  Enjoyed this one, Sir!

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6 posted 2002-08-27 09:42 AM


Excellent tribute dear Magnus, and oh, so very true!! Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Toerag
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7 posted 2002-08-27 09:47 AM


And until I got to the part that said "she" I thought this was about me?...Oh well, great poem however, like most of yours are!
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8 posted 2002-08-27 01:35 PM


A fitting tribute. Nicely done.
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