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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-08-26 09:44 AM

Where You Are

you are
the wind
and flow
through me
beneath
the very bark
of my
tree
these limbs
now bend
from gentle
caress
to leave
the mark
you do
possess
and with
the breath
of invisible
tide
I know
your touch
it is where
you reside

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

1 posted 2002-08-26 09:47 AM

Helen so few words that speak volumes. This is very lovely!

If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream...

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2002-08-26 09:51 AM

Helen,
I would say elegant.

Toerag
Member Ascendant

since 1999-07-29

Posts 5622
Ala bam a

3 posted 2002-08-26 09:54 AM

The wind?....oh boy, please don't read "Let's Get Ready To Rumble" dear, that will change the whole idea behind this great poem...

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

4 posted 2002-08-26 10:05 AM

gs...ty you are so sweet

sy...your words touch like velvet

toe...be nice...or i will stub you...giggle

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

5 posted 2002-08-26 10:11 AM

Your words inspire me
to write a bit out of character,
Hope you enjoy.

Let me flow across your branches
Let me be the wind that dances
In you leaves lush and fluttering
Let me search in your roots below
Let me learn all of you to know
Tell me in light air muttering
As you close your eyes to sleep
Let your sleepy breath be mine to keep
Till the morn finds up once more waking.

Gloom

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

6 posted 2002-08-26 10:14 AM

prince of darkness...breathless just breathless

WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

7 posted 2002-08-26 11:39 AM

Helen,

As always enjoyed the style and grace with which you write.

Toerag
Member Ascendant

since 1999-07-29

Posts 5622
Ala bam a

8 posted 2002-08-26 11:41 AM

Is "stub" a good thing?....LOL

Krishankins

Senior Member

since 2002-06-23

Posts 972
Texas

9 posted 2002-08-26 11:36 PM

i'm enjoying these more every time thati read them.

A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground

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