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Whispers - Inspired by Greeneyes
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Whispers - Inspired by Greeneyes |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... 
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~*Whispers*~ Whispers... Poetic sighs... Tender pennings of heart Float freely on a pillowed breeze Mere parchment has no hold on poet's ink Listen...you may hear it breathing Be still...let it touch you The poet's breath... Whispers ~vlraynes "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truly met the poet. ~vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (08-26-2002 02:32 AM).] |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
Outstanding! Poet’s words are more than a picture can hold. Thanks, Melton |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Beautifully penned, I enjoyed the flow and the soft tender way about this poem. ~hugs~ Tracie Love is the life of the soul... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I do believe that is exactly how she does it! A great tribute to a wonderful poet & friend! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
yeppers that is indeed our Lauren and you have written a beauty Vicky. Bravo. If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream... |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Love this, whispers speak louder than words to me. Touch me with your whispers, |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
that I could inspire something so beautiful Vicky, very touching....thank you....  HUGSSSLauren~ The ocean looks like a thousand diamonds strewn across a blue blanket |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
vlraynes - beautiful whispers you write... BC |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Vicky~ Nobody ... but nobody ... works this Rictameter form to delicate perfection like you do~ I am SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO happy for your 'inspire'~ Beautiful little buddy~  *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Beautiful words... beautiful formatting... This piece whispers loudly of your talent, Vicky  ~ whispering hugsLyra |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
you still got it my poet friend...  very nice ink linkage..must say, i've missed reading your ink.......!! lv,g ~dgvarner/fallen rain~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwww, this is beautiful, sweet friend, I love it! (kiss on cheek) I have missed your wonderful words so so much and am so happy our sweet friend Lauren inspired you, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lauren, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nicely written |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Vicky So good to see you...this is lovely..and just right for her. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Thanks so much, everyone. I appreciate you all SO MUCH! Melton- Thanks so much for the 'outstanding'. I'm really happy you enjoyed this. Tracie- I appreciate your kind words. Thank you. Karilea- Thanks so much for reading. I appreciate you. Gentle Spirit- The beauty of her poetry is so inspiring. I'm very glad you enjoyed this. WhiteRose- To me too. Glad you enjoyed. Lauren- Thank YOU! You truly are a very talented poet and I love reading your words. HUGS back to you, my friend. Bill- Thanks so much, my friend. Marge- You've put a great big smile on my face. But, then...you KNEW you would, didn't you? LOL. Thank you SO MUCH for all that you are and all that you do. Love you bunches, buddy.  Lyra- Thank you so much for such a kind reply. I'm so happy you enjoyed this. dg- I've missed my ink too...believe me. It's good to be back and it's good to have you here with me. Love and hugs and stuff. Noah- I'm not Lauren...I'm Vicky...but thank you for the kind words just the same. I'm glad you enjoyed this. vandana- Thank you...glad you enjoyed. Martie- So good to be seen. Thanks for reading, my friend. "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truly met the poet. ~vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (08-26-2002 11:28 PM).] |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
What can I say girl? This is awesome!!!! I love it...It's good to see you here! Miss you Love ya Cindi |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
vlraynes, Reminds me of that part on Pet Sounds when Brian lets his (studio) bass breathe and heart-pulse as he plies us with "Listen, listen, listen..." Congrats! You've made me think of my favorite LP of all time. Mike |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You painted a picture with your words ---literally! Skillfully done! Love, Light & Laughter Linda |
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