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Krishankins

Senior Member

since 2002-06-23

Posts 972
Texas

0 posted 2002-08-26 12:25 PM

Tonight it was different
When you called me to cry
Cause we've grown so close
That these tears felt like mine

I know how you hurt
I've felt all of your pain
The memories we've shared
Somehow all end in rain

Let me be there for you this time
When he needs someone to hit
Let me shield you from the love
Of his iron fist

You say it's not my problem
But I disagree
See, you're more than my sister
You're a friend that I need

Let me help you escape
Be the light in your night
I'll show him tough love
If he needs to fight

If all I can do
Is to listen sometimes
I'll make you feel better
Take your tears as mine

So sleep well little sister
Please know that I'm here
To comfort your sorrow
To dry Carla's tears

I love you sis!

[This message has been edited by Krishankins (08-26-2002 12:29 AM).]

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2002-08-26 12:45 PM

You are a wonderful brother! I hope your sister finds a way to get out of that relationship. Hitters are losers.

brian sites
Senior Member

since 2002-06-25

Posts 1475
usa

2 posted 2002-08-26 12:49 PM

nice one to your sister, Kris
we're there for family
and she's got a good brother
I say, go have a talk with him
brian

WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

3 posted 2002-08-26 12:27 PM

awwwwwwww..this is so sweet. Your sister is blessed with a brother such as you.

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

4 posted 2002-08-26 12:42 PM

Cause we've grown so close
That these tears felt like mine
=============================

those are very touching and tender words...
they stood out and spoke to me....
Theres no easy answers in these situations..shes lucky to have you in her corner to help her be strong.
A lovely dedication to you sister.
Well done poet sir
jm

In the space between now and then
I lost the fire, lost a friend
and Ill never be the same again
Still, I believe in the innocence
we gave away.

Gabriel Frost
Member

since 2002-08-15

Posts 216
Between midnight thoughts

5 posted 2002-08-26 01:01 PM

Your sister is indeed lucky to have a brother and friend like you.Good job sticking up for her.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

6 posted 2002-08-26 01:30 PM

There is nothing quite like
a brother's love...
Your sister is in my prayers...

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2002-08-26 09:14 PM

(big hugggssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, I wish the world had more loving and faithful brothers like you who look out for all their loved ones, my heart goes out to Carla and I too hope she gets free from that undeserved treatment! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kristopher, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

8 posted 2002-08-26 09:16 PM

Beautifl, Kris. I always wished I had a brother to defend me. She is lucky to have you.
Sandra

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

9 posted 2002-08-26 09:18 PM

You certainly are a blessing of a brother. Enjoyed your poem and I pray things change for the better for your sister. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

10 posted 2002-08-27 11:36 PM

Yes Kris, I believe that you should have a good long talk with this cowardly [edit] [edit] piece of [edit]. Men(?) such as this need a little...uh,....tutoring.

Sorry, but I just can't abide this behavior.

Best of luck to your sister, my friend. She is indeed lucky to have you.

~Ed

In reply to "which way do we go?", the answer was never "straight", but, "progressively forward".

~wranx~

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

11 posted 2002-08-28 03:03 AM

Kris-
This brought a lump to my throat and a tear
to my eye. You are one VERY special brother
and your sister is very fortunate to have you.
You've penned this beautifully and your love
for her burns through like the flame of the candle.
Thank you for sharing this.
Hugs to you and Carla,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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