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Open Poetry #22

Transfering Me Heavenly

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2002-08-26 12:09 PM

Transfering Me Heavenly

Lovely.
Simply lovely.
This would be
one way I could
describe you.
Immenselely desirable.
That would be number two.
Shall I go on and describe
some thoughts her moist
lips bring to me?
Soft.
Sweet.
Sensual.
Succulent thoughts
of her kiss
have transfered
my desires
towards the
heavenly.

JamesLee
August23
2002

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2002-08-26 12:25 PM

Ah, James, you've penned another kissing poem. It must be some kiss if it's transporting you that far!

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

2 posted 2002-08-26 12:29 PM

I think this is so sweet and so very well written...
I liked it a lot, James...

~ chipmunky hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

3 posted 2002-08-26 01:37 AM

JamesMichael-
Nobody writes kisses like you do.
Beautifully done.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

4 posted 2002-08-26 02:48 PM

Yum! A lovely kiss penned so softly. Enjoyed

[This message has been edited by WhiteRose (08-26-2002 02:57 PM).]

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

5 posted 2002-08-26 03:08 PM

Sensual.
Succulent thoughts
of her kiss
have transfered
my desires
towards the
heavenly

Well now, this is very nice!! Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2002-08-26 09:44 PM

(smiles) Oh James, this is soooooo beautiful, I love it, and may her kisses always shower your heart with delight and carry you heaven-bound! (big hugggsssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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