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Sven
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0 posted 2002-08-25 10:12 PM


August comes again, unknown, unseen
       not sure of what it wants to be
              (hot like July or cool like September)
         and so, the dog days come, long and hot

following this logic
               (which even poets must do from time to time)
            the cat days would come as well, short and cool
the August rain would fall slowly, like tears
               filling the sky with a lonely shade of gray
a shade that the lightning dare not pierce
        lest it lose its shine

people would welcome the cat days as cool relief
       but, we who hear the language of seasons
              know that the cat days echo September in their eyes
reflections of green, red, and yellow that wait to be
       held for that moment when the leaves know their time
                       (there's a reason they call it Fall)

        and so, the cat days have come
August, a shadowed memory of itself
       gives way to multi-dappled September
              clothed in chill, hands clasped in want
and August remembers

          the days may grow short when you reach September
              but, the nights grow longer
                                             in August

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1 posted 2002-08-25 10:21 PM


       and so, the cat days have come
August, a shadowed memory of itself
       gives way to multi-dappled September
              clothed in chill, hands clasped in want
and August remembers

Wonderful Sven!! Enjoyed. Chris

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2 posted 2002-08-25 10:28 PM




(sigh) Oh yes indeed, and all the way till December do the nights creep longer and the cat days slowly turn into wolf days as they get cooler until spring comes and starts the cycle again! (big hugggssssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, I just love your thoughts we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sven, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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3 posted 2002-08-25 10:30 PM


Yes, it would just stand to reason they would be considered "cat days". My favorite actually. Enjoyed

[This message has been edited by WhiteRose (08-25-2002 10:30 PM).]

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4 posted 2002-08-26 12:20 PM


Ohhhh I wait for SEPT cooler days.....and you are correct sir days are longer in AUG....lovely piece my friend....


Lauren~

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5 posted 2002-08-26 01:05 AM


This is good, Sven...really really good!
I like these cat days...
now I have to go and find my winter clothes...
but thats okay...
I love autumn...
~ hugs from chipmunk who is running scared from the cats

Lyra

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6 posted 2002-08-26 06:33 PM


I've learned what "cat days" are today and I couldn't think of a more pleasant way to learn. Simply wonderful Sven.
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7 posted 2002-08-26 08:57 PM


Ah, I love the coming cat days, much better than the dog days of August. Though I do know some pretty cool people born in August
Sandra

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8 posted 2002-08-27 03:44 PM


Just thought I would give a gentle "bump"
to another of your typically superb pieces
of poetry....

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