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WhiteRose
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somebody's dungeon

0 posted 2002-08-25 07:57 PM


my turn :-)


Sensing forgiveness
within the depths
of darkened eyes
in an instant
of understanding,
peace at last.




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1 posted 2002-08-25 07:58 PM


Not bad...not bad at all....in fact...

Quite CottonPickin' good.....


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2 posted 2002-08-25 10:44 PM




(smiles) Oh Anne, this is wonderful, sweet friend, I love it, may forgiveness always fill your heart and comfort you with relief and rejuvenation! (kiss on cheek) This is an excellent 20 or less, sweet friend, YAY, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Anne, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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3 posted 2002-08-25 11:32 PM


nice.
Gabriel Frost
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4 posted 2002-08-25 11:46 PM


Forgivness is such an expensive gift, won't you say?
Well done!
Bravo.

Madame Chipmunk
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5 posted 2002-08-26 12:01 PM


Excellent, Anne...
I can never do those 20 or less poems because I chatter too much and so do my poems.
~ forgiven hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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