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Elizabeth Santos
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Pennsylvania

0 posted 2002-08-25 02:18 PM



In a Capsule

That bleak September day was when my spirit soared away
To a darker place where heavens turned a sultry, stagnant gray
It stood within the rising dust and reached to muffled cries
Touching spirits of the dead, embracing spirits of the live

And my soul heard hurried voices of the victims calling home
To echo out a love that lingered in a telephone
For the seconds that remained were the essence of the two
In a capsule of remembrance that the both so fondly knew

Then my spirit saw a girl in the cloud of no return
Unaware her youthful life had taken one more subtle turn
She smiled sweetly as she walked back into charred debris
In a vision that made quakes of fear reverberate in me

My fragile heart was torn for the deed that had been done
And for those dear ones who walked with grace into the destined sun
For the children were my daughters and my fathers were the men
Who were buried in the towers that would never rise again

My tears were in the water sprays that doused the lingering flame
My voice was in a siren calling out a crumbled name
My blood flowed into rhythms of a firefighter’s chest
And in veins of family members who had sought a hopeful quest

Then my spirit in the dust turned and said these words to me
There’s a man who thought the tower’s doom was Babel’s destiny
He underestimated love, he misunderstood the strength
Of a land of many languages that fringe our borders length

For his horrid deed‘s a testament to terror and to hate
And our union is a power which nobody should berate
He has brought together spirits congregated at this sight
Keeping vigil o’er destruction and man’s courage in the fight

In the early dawning hours, with my joy of heart deplete
There were flags on every mailbox lining every city street
There were prayers for fallen brothers, there were cries of liberty
And all eyes were gazing toward the east beyond a distant sea

To a web of self destruction, to the hour of might or must
When a bearded man from tower’s height will fall into the dust
To the day when we have put to rest a name that rings so clear
When our classroom will not empty out ofterrorism’s fear

We’re a land of many languages, from distances we plod
And we never needed towers to reach toward the hand of God
For His hand is reaching down to us, we only need take hold
When we see twin towers of agony have turned to streets of gold

In a place in New York City is a spot of level ground
Where my spirit witnessed hatred and where love is sweetly found

Elizabeth Santos

© Copyright 2002 Elizabeth Santos - All Rights Reserved
Midnitesun
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1 posted 2002-08-25 02:36 PM


I will keep this one in my favorites time capsule. Thank you for such a beautiful look at such a tragic event.
Martie
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2 posted 2002-08-25 03:08 PM


Liz

You speak of this with power, wisdom and grace...and I am moved, as always, by your ability to make with words, your heart's place.

Elizabeth Santos
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since 1999-11-08
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Pennsylvania
3 posted 2002-08-25 03:37 PM


Midnitesun, I am honored that you would keep my poem, I am glad it touched you in some way. Thank you

Martie,Your words and thoughts are very warming. I appreciate your comments more than you know

Thanks
Liz

Muys
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4 posted 2002-08-25 05:37 PM


Dear Elizabeth Santos
Your nice poem touch my heart,
every time sombody wrote a lettre about
Septembre.we never fergot
Muys
ps
I hope I have you understand?
Please tell my, yuor old friend Muys

Madame Chipmunk
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5 posted 2002-08-25 06:36 PM


A beautifully written tribute to those who lost their lives at the World Trade Center on Sept. 11....
Its so hard to believe that its been almost a year...
~ hugs and tears

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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just out of reach
6 posted 2002-08-25 07:42 PM


Elizabeth, this a truly heart-wrenching piece of work, well done, and going into my library. Chris
Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269
Pennsylvania
7 posted 2002-08-25 08:19 PM


Muys,
I understood perfectly every word and every thought in your heart. Thank you for reading my poem and for responding with your kind comments
I hope you had a wonderful birthday
I hope Titia enjoys Pennsylvania
LOve
Liz

Lyra, yes how swiftly time passes. It has been a year a flags still fly on the mailboxes here on my street. THanks for you words. You wrote the most amazing poem about pain. It still echoes in my ears
Take care

Niteshade, I am so warmed when someone saves a poem, for I know that it has touched you
THanks

Liz

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