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walker
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0 posted 2002-08-24 09:01 PM



Love's seduced my willing heart
and yes I've spend countless nights
in your lustful arms
I've indulged
always fearing that tomorrow
would bring sorrow
Yet I cannot quench my thirst
I am love
and you are pain
together we rob every sin
and make it ours
Fulfilling every fantasy
but that of love
Kiss my lips one more time
and in darkness
I will hide my tears
like I always do
Love me
please do

© Copyright 2002 walker - All Rights Reserved
Bill Charles
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1 posted 2002-08-24 09:18 PM


walker - you say your thoughts well in this write...

BC

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2 posted 2002-08-24 09:24 PM


Very nicely penned thoughts here...
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

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3 posted 2002-08-24 09:29 PM


walker - very heartfelt write. Enjoyed. Chris

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4 posted 2002-08-24 09:56 PM




(sigh) Oh Walker, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love it, and may love always touch your heart and fill you with comfort! (kiss on cheek) This is heartfelt, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Walker, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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5 posted 2002-08-24 10:11 PM


An extremely melancholy and sad poem...perfectly written.


JamesMichael
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6 posted 2002-08-25 02:06 AM


Very nice...James
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7 posted 2002-08-25 02:13 AM


Damn, walker...yer back!!!!  And with fireworks!!
WhiteRose
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8 posted 2002-08-25 08:12 PM


An incredible write. Enjoyed very much!
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9 posted 2002-08-25 08:27 PM


I have to echo what Duncan said,  in spades
even...  

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