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Open Poetry #22

Lost... In A Dark Pool Of Illusion

Neeraja
Senior Member

since 2002-06-22

Posts 812
The Netherlands

0 posted 2002-08-24 02:01 PM

Mijn lief
is lost
in his world
of light
and voices
his mind
making overtime
travelling
between
reality
and non-reality…
I desperately
try to keep him
from falling deeper
into this
dark pool
of illusion
while the cold
darkness
has paralized
his free will
I can only watch
hoping
and praying
for a miracle...

Gabriel Frost
Member

since 2002-08-15

Posts 216
Between midnight thoughts

1 posted 2002-08-24 02:06 PM

Very sad and yet hopeful. I like it!

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2002-08-24 02:19 PM

Neeraja
Miracles do happen, Enjoyed the write and read.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-08-24 02:25 PM

(big hugggssssss) Oh Neeraja, I believe with all my heart it will come true for you and out of the blue like a bolt all your love and joy will come to you! (kiss on cheek) This is heartfelt, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Neeraja, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Neeraja
Senior Member

since 2002-06-22

Posts 812
The Netherlands

4 posted 2002-08-24 02:27 PM

Thanks Gabriel... and thanks Seymour... right now I am still shocked... I didn't saw this coming... this is really hard... more because he is in America and I am in Holland... I can't even hold his hand...

Neeraja

Neeraja
Senior Member

since 2002-06-22

Posts 812
The Netherlands

5 posted 2002-08-24 02:31 PM

Thanks Noah...

Neeraja

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

6 posted 2002-08-24 08:59 PM

Neeraja - I know it's very difficult to be away from one cared for. Best to you, and hang in there...

BC

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

7 posted 2002-08-24 09:05 PM

Neeraja, you are both in my prayers.

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

8 posted 2002-08-24 10:51 PM

My heart goes out to you, Neeraja...
as well as my prayers.

~ tender hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

Neeraja
Senior Member

since 2002-06-22

Posts 812
The Netherlands

9 posted 2002-08-25 02:51 AM

You are all so sweet... thank you so much...

Neeraja

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