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HopeS
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0 posted 2002-08-24 10:16 AM



Its Almost Springtime

With birds hovering
Its in between time
Trees soon dress
Awaiting springtime

Once a bare bark
With thirsty desire
Soaks in showers
Adorns green attire

Winter’s dormancy
A springtime nears
Trees in readiness
Each leaf appears

Unfolding are buds
From winters sleep
Scents filling the air
Petals start to peep

Waving in its glow
A graceful butterfly
Blooms bright faces
Holding heads high

Humming , buzzing
In growing sunshine
A garden is blessed
Its almost springtime

Hope ©2002

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Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2002-08-24 10:19 AM


HopeS,
You made it a delightful one. Lovely write.

Bill Charles
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2 posted 2002-08-24 10:25 AM


HopeS - one of my favorite times, as you write...

BC

HopeS
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3 posted 2002-08-24 10:29 AM


Thanks Seymour for your kind sweet reply ,
yes I do think springtime gives my thoughts  the brighter outlook , I know we will be heading for a very long drought soon so I shall enjoy the colour and greenery while I can
Hope

HopeS
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4 posted 2002-08-24 10:31 AM


thanks Bill one of my favourite seasons too
Hope

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5 posted 2002-08-24 12:41 PM




YAY!!! Oh my gosh, I love spring so much, it is my favorite season, oohhhh...and may many more butterflies grace your garden real soon! (kiss on cheek) This is beautiful, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Hope, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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6 posted 2002-08-24 12:43 PM


Hope the springtime with its colors so vivid is a beautiful time of the year and you have painted a beautiful portrait for us all to enjoy.  Hugs.

If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream...

Madame Chipmunk
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7 posted 2002-08-26 01:51 PM


I was wondering why you were writing about springtime when its almost autumn...and then I noticed that you live in Australia....
where everything is backwards from the way it is here...
A very beautiful poem, Hope...
I really enjoyed it and it got me thinking of next spring and how far away it is...
~ springtime hugs

Lyra

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