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Look at me now
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Look at me now |
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TriXter Member
since 2002-03-20
Posts 112The One |
look at me see what ive done Ive always fought my troubles not once have i run Takin on issues just head to head, always winning but everytime by more then a thread, usta run away but now i fight head on never a moments peace always fightin to survive form dusk till dawn, back to my roots cause look what you do you make me run away youre too hard to see through everytime time i try to get close i dont know if youre true so goodbye till i know what you are and are not or until you slip up and you end up gettin caught till that day goodbye for now. I fell in love with youre smile in grade 8 i thought that were we meant to meet, it felt like fate But nothin new happend between me and you everytime a door opend, wed never walk through annytime we had a moment, not knowin what to do. I wish id done more then i actually did maybe then this feelin would end and would subdue maybe only if I had done more, knowin what wed been through But look at me now, i'm forgetting about you. deicded tonight id let you pass no longer would my heart feel pain and be harassed by my mind sayin somethin about itself thats untrue hopin that a feelin will sometime subdue A twix of lemon bacardi lets you off my mind and hopefully leaves you in the dust leaves you far behind. so much effort trying to be with you knowing love will never come true even thought i know ill never forget you. Trying to move on new girls new storys new signs of love, hopin a messanger would appear in the form of a dove tellin me youre gone and id found a new true but in the dark i find myself wiriting about you, so look at me now, with you on my mind take a dive into my heart think and survive and theres no knowin what emotions there you will find. The man of few words... |
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secretlife Member
since 2002-07-30
Posts 359Grean Earth ,,, |
Great words?? I really respect what you have written.. You are so sensitive person and I really respect the person who has kind feelings... Just dont be sad we all here with you… sharing together your sadness dear friend.. You are a very good writer.. Just keep writing and I will be looking forward to read more from you.. Good luck Secretlife, (Easy come,,Easy go) |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
TriXter For a man of few word you must have saved these all up to set them down now. Enjoyed the read. |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
You speak from the heart. This pain, torment is what makes us human. You will eventually heal and the hurt will lie low as new experiences are layered above. When you stop feeling there will be nothing left. So remember this moment, put it away and carry on as best you can till a new experience carries you away. Well done, keep writing. I remind you as I remind myself. Write of the pain but, write of the good too!  |
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