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ecrivan
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0 posted 2002-08-24 04:00 AM



'Who' was on first
that might have been his name
no, 'who' was on second
besides sport's just a game
'who' fired the first volley
takes a crowd of onlookers to stir "folie"
and report a lone man on his mission spree
with a magic capsule in his hand
was he on first when evidence projected
no 'who' was he...a mascot,spy or player?
then he had to be on second
t'was another base I reckon
maybe it was third
'steal home base,'..I heard.






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1 posted 2002-08-24 08:35 AM



I do enjoy your mind rumbles...

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2 posted 2002-08-24 10:40 AM


So many questions..so few answers, thanks Karilea


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3 posted 2002-08-24 12:45 PM




(sigh) Indeed, it seems the entire concept of investigation is slowly becomning out-dated as the world becomes more complicated and now we must find new solutions that limit questions and find more answers! (sigh) This is powerful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martin, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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4 posted 2002-08-25 10:52 PM


Very good at coming to the heart of the poem Noah..it has been said that on many occasions someone is looked up just for the sake of putting somebody away. Years later we find find that person never committed any
offense. This is happening everywhere in the world and certain issues should be addressed.


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