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secretlife
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Grean Earth ,,,

0 posted 2002-08-24 01:57 AM


Forgive me...I am guilty
I didn’t mean it... believe me...
I didn’t know that some day I would be in this situation...
I know it’s hard for you...
But it was out of my control...
At least my heart feels better to tell you every thing...
But still worry about you..
I know that I am guilty...
So forgive me ....

Secretlife,
(Easy come,,Easy go)


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Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2002-08-24 02:11 AM


Hope the intended reads this, and hope this write helps release the guilt.
DawnG
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2 posted 2002-08-24 09:15 PM


I hope this writing of this poem helps you to release your pain. You did a nice job of conveying your thoughts. I too hope the intended reads this.

                       Dawn

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3 posted 2002-08-24 09:49 PM




(big hugggssssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, I know with a golden heart like yours you will be forgiven! (kiss on cheek) This is compassionately touching, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Dawn, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

SimplyGold
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4 posted 2002-08-24 11:49 PM


Make peace with yourself and you will rest easier. Learn, repent and move forward my friend. We are all human. Use this to bring about postitive change. Sleep well and just give a little more of yourself next time.

SimplyGold

Night Shadow
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5 posted 2002-08-25 06:53 AM


Sweet Heart,
I think that cute one like u cant be guilty, and let us say that u made a mistake,so im sure that ur partner will never feel it, cuz ur secret eyes will never give him the chance to recognize it.

Night Shadow

WhiteRose
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6 posted 2002-08-25 10:03 PM


Been there, still there. The apology never ends. Great poem. I too, hope the intended reads this.
secretlife
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Grean Earth ,,,
7 posted 2002-08-31 11:21 AM


Thanx all for reading mine and Iam glad to hear ur opinion,,

Huges
Secretlife,
(Easy come,,Easy go)


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