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Joyce Johnson
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0 posted 2002-08-23 05:59 PM


Broken Promise

I promised Mama I would be
A good girl, she'd be proud of me.
But this is what she doesn't know,
The truth is that I have a beau.
He kissed me once, he kissed me twice
And though I knew it wasn't nice;
I kissed him back once, twice and three.
O please don't tell Mama on me.

Joyce 8/23/02

© Copyright 2002 Joyce I Johnson - All Rights Reserved
WhiteRose
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1 posted 2002-08-23 06:15 PM


I won't tell. But I'm glad you told us, as it was delightful in the telling.
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2 posted 2002-08-23 06:27 PM


Joyce,
Cute and clever, enjoyed the read.

Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2002-08-23 07:31 PM


OhJoyce~
You *gift* us with the sweetest writes~
This is adorable~
So nice to have you sharing in Open with us~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

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4 posted 2002-08-23 07:33 PM


Joyce this is so cute!
Enjoyed this with a smile.
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

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5 posted 2002-08-23 10:53 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo cute, sweet friend, uh oh, never make promises you can't keep! LOL! This is so funny and cute, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Joyce, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

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6 posted 2002-08-23 11:52 PM


I had to chuckle at this one. You are not a kiss-and-tell gal. Doesn't that make you a good girl???

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