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wranx
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Moved from a shack to a barn

0 posted 2002-08-23 05:45 PM



Etoile


Everything that has happened before
The appearance of her into my life
Only serves as the starting point
In my quest for completion,
Love, may illuminate this journey
Etoile, might just shed, such light


~wranx

In reply to "which way do we go?", the answer was never "straight", but, "progressively forward".      

~wranx~

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Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2002-08-23 06:24 PM


wranx
All I can say is lots of luck, enjoyed.

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2 posted 2002-08-23 08:03 PM



A quiet comment
to the heart

I like this...

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3 posted 2002-08-23 08:13 PM


wranx

a star only lights the heart that sees it.  Enjoyed this.

ThisDiamond
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4 posted 2002-08-23 10:25 PM


Such talented portrayal of the lost boys (Peter Pan)...
Very well done. ThisDiamond

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5 posted 2002-08-24 01:09 PM


looking at poem
it appears
the "might"
is unnecessary
the light
is already
on

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6 posted 2002-08-24 01:26 PM




(smiles) Oh Wranx, this is beautiful, I love it! This is a soft plea to the heart hat I hope is answered upon a star, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Wranx, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

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7 posted 2002-08-26 09:00 AM


excuse me, but I think your soul is showing... (and shaking my head at the signiature, with a grin)
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