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Kitty**
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Charlottesville,VA USA

0 posted 2002-08-23 04:39 PM



NOT ME !

For once I'd like to write a poem,
about happiness, and the love of someone.
I'd like to say ' We ' have a love
that will be there, when all's said and done.

I'd like to write, about holding hands,
To know, all is right in my world.
To have a strong shoulder to lean on,
and the words ' I love you ' unfurled

I want to write, about kisses sweet,
and two hearts, beating as one.
But the beauty, of this kind of magic,
is a love song I've never heard sung.

And so I read, about other peoples love,
as they share, their love every night.
And I long to be held, in warm, loving arms,
feeling protected, all through the night.

My love, heart and soul, I've given away.
Though he deserves, more then I can give.
And though by him, I may never be loved,
Through others, I've learned to live.

* That which gives light, must endure burning *

© Copyright 2002 Kitty Sandridge - All Rights Reserved
Toerag
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since 1999-07-29
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Ala bam a
1 posted 2002-08-23 04:42 PM


Isn't that everyone's wish?....Well, not my only one...I'd be happy if I could just write like this....
Kitty**
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since 1999-07-27
Posts 428
Charlottesville,VA USA
2 posted 2002-08-23 05:01 PM




Toerag...Don't you DARE say you can't write
like this. YOU DO!! I LOVE your poems. I even like the crazy stuff you write!! ;-)
ME..well I just write, whatever.

Some how I feel like I'm the only one wishing this way, and I thank you sincerely for your sweet words.

Kitty

* That which gives light, must endure burning *

suthern
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3 posted 2002-08-23 05:11 PM


I know these feelings so very well, Kitty... and you've written them beautifully. *S* Great poem!
Gentle Spirit
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4 posted 2002-08-23 05:14 PM


Kitty this is everyone's wish I think at one point and time in life.  Hey, I LIKE how you write, just write like YOU.

If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream...

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
5 posted 2002-08-23 06:34 PM


Kitty,
You are so pretty, someone is missing a very good thing. PS. And the read of your write is a delight.

Kitty**
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since 1999-07-27
Posts 428
Charlottesville,VA USA
6 posted 2002-08-23 10:58 PM


To all of you, Thank you so much!
And SEYMOUR...hey, hey, what can I say? ;-)
First compliment I've had in quite sometime,
and I am most flattered!! Thank you for the kind words.

Kitty

* That which gives light, must endure burning *

secretlife
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since 2002-07-30
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7 posted 2002-08-24 08:13 AM


Enjoyed?? I love that so much..
Wish you all the happiness dear..

       Good luck
secretlife,
(Easy come,,Easy go)


Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
8 posted 2002-08-24 10:16 AM


Kitty - after reading your words I have to say you have written about your dreams very well. By the way, I used to live in Charlottesville. I still have relatives that live in Ruckersville...

BC

Kitty**
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since 1999-07-27
Posts 428
Charlottesville,VA USA
9 posted 2002-08-24 11:06 AM


secretlife: Thanks for your wishes! Ya know sometimes they do come true! ;-)

Bill Charles: Thanks to you also and please check your e-mail.


Kitty

* That which gives light, must endure burning *

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