Surrender To Gender...In Tender Trace of Lace

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Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2002-08-23 04:19 PM

Ever wonder why
they are so very different...
Fussing over a hair...
A nail...

Why they cry at silly things...
Laugh at the male of me...
Giggle in the night
Love passionately..

How a hug brings joy
the gentle touch of silken hands...
The feel of silky skin....
Fresh as Spring dew...
Summer’s heat
Fall’s cool...

Their eyes....
A book to their soul and heart
ever open for reading..
If only you just take the time
to read...and savor each word
unspoken...but real...

Legs that defy imagined thought
that caress the eyes as eyes caress
the view of mown trees..

Love me, the eyes say softly
as whispered words echo
the feel of lace...the chase
of feel....the touch...

I will...
For thee art most lovely
and each moment is but
one moment of treasure
in pleasure
of you....

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-08-23 04:31 PM

(smiles) Yes!!! Cherish each moment individually, for every smile and every tear has a poem of its own that only makes up part of an entire loves joy, not by Maybelline or hosiery! (big hugggsssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (08-23-2002 04:36 PM).]

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2002-08-23 04:32 PM

Oh Barry!! OH BARRY!! I feel a sigh coming on!
I think this should be read by every man alive!
OH YES!! You sure do know how to make a woman swoon.
I know many a man who could learn a few things from reading this.
Excellent write Barry.
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
So you won't ever forget me ~

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2002-08-23 04:40 PM

Magnus~
This is just a wonderfully written piece~
I think it shall be enjoyed by many~
What a lovely statement of appreciation for the tender-gender ...
by the gentle-gender~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Toerag
Member Ascendant

since 1999-07-29

Posts 5622
Ala bam a

4 posted 2002-08-23 04:41 PM

LongJohn used to tell me this about Balladeer all the time.....this is a wonderful write Maggie.....you are very talented....someday, if I ever grow up I'll write like this....okay, so I'm dreaming, but I did like this one a bunch!

[This message has been edited by Toerag (08-23-2002 05:09 PM).]

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

5 posted 2002-08-23 04:46 PM

now this is free verse at it's best and just a real sigh maker too. Fabulous Barry.

If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream...

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

6 posted 2002-08-23 04:54 PM

I enjoyed this very much, Magnus... well done! *S*

Sunshine

Administrator

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

7 posted 2002-08-23 05:09 PM

I think even the tomboy of me
would put on a dress to dance
to this one...

well done, Sir...

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

8 posted 2002-08-23 06:08 PM

Their eyes....
A book to their soul and heart
ever open for reading..
If only you just take the time
to read...and savor each word
unspoken...but real

Simply lovely write dear Magnus. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

9 posted 2002-08-23 06:12 PM

Exquisite Barry!! I loved every word and felt your sensitivity in this piece more than any other. You are a romantic soul. A womans dream come true. Your thoughts caress a womans mind. *sigh*

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

10 posted 2002-08-23 06:39 PM

enjoyed

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

11 posted 2002-08-24 12:25 PM

swoon!

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

12 posted 2002-08-24 10:35 AM

Barry - oh yes, they are all of these things. Very nicely done...

BC

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

13 posted 2002-08-24 10:42 AM

Barry

Lovely and sensitive, you are!

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

14 posted 2002-08-24 11:04 AM

There are few men in this world that have the ability or depth to know this...
Impressive dear Poet...TD

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

15 posted 2002-08-25 11:57 PM

Magnus this is succulent...simply excellent...James

Greeneyes

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since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

16 posted 2002-08-26 12:17 PM

Sigh....

Lauren~

The ocean looks like a thousand diamonds strewn across a blue blanket
I lean against the wind pretend I am weightless and in this moment I am happy

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