The Lost Sonnets - The Meaning of Eternity

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Open Poetry #22

The Lost Sonnets - The Meaning of Eternity

Gabriel Frost
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since 2002-08-15

Posts 216
Between midnight thoughts

0 posted 2002-08-23 01:29 PM

Baby I know forever's more than just worth a try,
I think it's meant for you and I,
It's in our palms if it's in our hearts,
And it's up to us to never part.
Baby just look me in the eye once more,
And tell me i'm the one you adore,
And my world will crumble at your feet,
That's just how much you mean to me.
Just breathe upon my wanting ear,
That kiss in the wind I need to hear,
In a whisper so sincere and true,
Those magical words I love you.
Then you will see the world as I,
We are and will be till the end of time,
Take my hand, trust your heart in me,
And you'll see in a moment what eternity means.

WhiteRose
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since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

1 posted 2002-08-23 02:31 PM

Simply lovely. I enjoyed it very much.

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

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Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2002-08-23 03:35 PM

Gabriel,
Enjoyed the read, but it's not my eternity.
LOL

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

3 posted 2002-08-23 04:06 PM

Gabriel - romance, you write it well...

BC

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-08-23 04:13 PM

(smiles) Oh Gabriel, this is sooooooo beautiful, I love it! (big hugggssssss) You always write romance so well, sweet friend, may you always find these sonnets to share with your love till eternity, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiufl heart, sweet Gabriel, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

5 posted 2002-08-23 04:47 PM

Gabriel, very beautiful and smooth writing. Wonderful..

If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream...

Gabriel Frost
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since 2002-08-15

Posts 216
Between midnight thoughts

6 posted 2002-08-25 10:57 PM

Thank you all for your comments!

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