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CSKpoet
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Island in Paradise

0 posted 2002-08-23 01:15 AM







Summer glow inside
Outside a painting is born
A sunburn canvas
Sun God brushes me scarlet
Bikini lines highlighted

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

© Copyright 2002 Cheryl Stewart Koomoa - All Rights Reserved
Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2002-08-23 01:33 AM


Aloha, Island lady! I enjoyed this kiss of sunshine poem.
Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2002-08-23 01:40 AM




(smiles) Oh Cheryl, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, aloha, all the colors made me feel I was soaking up the sun, I would love a mango smoothie about now! (kiss on cheek) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Cheryl, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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The heart of you
3 posted 2002-08-23 12:26 PM


Those (and these) are my favorite kinds of lines.

Thank you.

What light through yon window breaks?  It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
4 posted 2002-08-23 12:28 PM


Cheryl...this is TANFASTIC!!
Loved it!
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
5 posted 2002-08-23 04:13 PM


CSKpoet - yes, right from the islands...

BC

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
6 posted 2002-08-23 04:19 PM



Isn't that the truth?

Gentle Spirit
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7 posted 2002-08-23 05:09 PM


Cheryl, bright, sunny, and deLIGHTful.
Well done gal!

If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream...

Marge Tindal
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Florida's Foreverly Shores
8 posted 2002-08-23 06:39 PM


SweetKoKo~
Delightful ... as always~
You bring such a poetic glow to the forums~
Be happy !
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
           noles1@totcon.com                       

CSKpoet
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Island in Paradise
9 posted 2002-08-23 11:15 PM


Midnightsun: aloha and thanks for the sweet greeting and kind comments on this haiku.I am glad it brought some enjoyment to you

Noah: Here you are again, you Mr Smile person thanks as always for your wonderful remarks.

Moonlight Romeo: I am glad this was enjoyed and thanks for the kind words....aloha

Enchantress: you are as kind and wonderful as ever..Tan comes after the burn...Owie till then thanks for the read and comments
hugs to you too...

Bill: well it is a concept from the beach, but I remember the sunburns that California gave me before Hawaii...ahhhh life is tough I guess..LOL thanks for the kind words and the read...

Sunshine:yep and all because the sunshine shines.. thanks for the read and comment.

Gentle spirit: your comment made my day shine so thank you very much.

Marge: smiles atcha GF! I am glad to see you in my corner again..makes me smile and encouraged to try to get my pen going again..
much love and hugs..

and a big aloha to all

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