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A Blank Page |
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D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
A blank page faced a writer With nothing to write with A thought emerged so pure That it melted the paper Leaving the imprint imbedded Forever in the mind A blank page faced a reader In an image so clear That the paper was absorbed totally In the thoughts transfixed to it Immersing them in stimulated thought Forever in time A blank page A paper with two views And four ways of looking at each page Taking the mind in different directions In what is imagined Within unique views D.Lester Young (08/23/02) Tuscaloosa, AL Copyright © D.Lester Young (White Eagle poetry) |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Yes, and this is an absorbing concept you've presented. It teases me, allows me to read between the lines, which of course, I do anyway. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
D.Lester Young- This is very cool. I really enjoyed reading it. Well done.  ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
neat concept |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I love the way you expressed everything. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Tis something to ponder! Well done. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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