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Mistletoe Angel
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0 posted 2002-08-22 08:53 PM


(This is for my sweet Joanna who I love so so much and is heaven to me every single day! I love and miss you so much!)



Stronger
By: Noah Eaton
8/22/02

Feeling your zephyr
All around me
It only feels so real
Sounds so comforting
When I'm lonely
I just want to lay down
In your dreams I'm happy
I'm cleared of my doubts

Not a minute goes by without your smile
It gently makes me cry over and over and over and over again

But my love for you only grows stronger
I love you even more everyday
In my heart you'll always linger
I would give anything to make you happy everyday

I suggest we
Dream awhile
Drift like vagabonds
To our special isle
I miss talking to you for hours
Sharing our happy place
Late into the evening
I hope to feel your grace

This summer I dreamed badly to meet you
Now I hope to share a white Christmas with you
The way it should have always been

But my love for you only grows stronger
I love you even more everyday
In my heart you'll always linger
I would give anything to make you happy everyday

Take a deep breath
Staring at your Polaroids
Dreaming of sharing
Halcyon days we can't avoid

I dream I'm walking in Palm Beach with you
Having mint-chocolate chip ice-cream and holding your hand
Sharing loves first kiss with you in the warm pouring rain
And I put my jacket around you to keep you warm
And all the harbor lights feel like Disneyland
We watch fireworks spark over the pearl pennisula
Hearing you laughing holding your hand
Brings tears to my eyes
Tears to my eyes...
Wanting this so badly to come true someday soon...

But my love for you only grows stronger
I love you even more everyday
In my heart you'll always linger
I would give anything to make you happy everyday
To feel your heart beat with joy...
To feel your heart beat with joy...
To be yours for all of time...


"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira


[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (08-22-2002 11:48 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-08-22 11:47 PM


Noah, I'm getting the impression you really like Joanna a lot!

A good testament of expressing your feelings, my friend

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2 posted 2002-08-22 11:52 PM


HUGSSSSSSSS sweet Noah~I am betting she will love this....   


Lauren~

The ocean looks like a thousand diamonds strewn across a blue blanket
I lean against the wind pretend I am weightless and in this moment I am happy

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3 posted 2002-08-23 12:14 PM


This is such a beautiful poem, Noah...
And the picture....Wow!
The picture compliments the poem perfectly.
I know that Joanna will love it.
~ lots of hugs for both of you

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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4 posted 2002-08-23 12:38 PM


You're such a romantic!

I love these lines:

I suggest we
                                                              Dream awhile
                                                            Drift like vagabonds
                                                             To our special isle

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Bill Charles
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5 posted 2002-08-23 11:07 AM


Noah - hope you can get together soon my friend...

BC

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6 posted 2002-08-23 11:09 PM


awwwwwwww, so sweet!

SS

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7 posted 2002-08-23 11:14 PM


Wonderful write sidekick!
Joanna sure is one lucky lady.
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

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8 posted 2002-08-24 08:06 AM


You know dear friend I have to tell Joanna how lucky she is to meet a man like you... She has to know that... I wish that you will be together forever and never stop loving her.. I hope that she has read your very kind words because you are a very sensitive person.. All I can say that wish you all the best and be always happy..


              Good luck


Secretlife,
(Easy come,,Easy go)


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9 posted 2002-08-24 06:57 PM


Awwwww.....Noah this was so beautifully written, the picture is so adorable and the love that flows out of you for your Joanna is a joy to behold.

May you two cuties find a way to get together real soon.

Hugs, Marti    

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