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Suetang
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Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2002-08-22 07:11 PM


Expose to me your feelings
Reveal your heart and soul
It is my desire to please you
So let my heart take full control

Devour me at sunset
Beneath the warming amber glow
Your love has spread like wildfire
Touching me more than you could know

Seduce me beneath the moonlight
Under the bright harvest moon
As we gorge on love's sweet nectar
We'll sway to our love's tune

Caress my body all over
Let me feel your tender touch
Give me hours of your pleasure
Your love could never be too much

Whisper to me sweet nothings
Tease my lips with your tongue
This night of exquisite sensations
Has now only just begun

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

© Copyright 2002 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
WhiteRose
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somebody's dungeon
1 posted 2002-08-22 07:35 PM


Wow! This is quite erotic Sue. A delight to read.
Magnus
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2 posted 2002-08-22 07:36 PM


This time....
has just now...now begun...
Your words of passion's flame
do flow in firelight dance
as love is felt the game
of two vice one perchance.

Your eyes that dance the gleam
of lusting light and stars.
Beside the clear of stream
to distant red of Mars...

Suetang
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3 posted 2002-08-22 07:54 PM


Thank you for reading this Anne and I'm glad you liked it.

Thank you so much Barry for your stunning words which even made me blush.

Take care.....Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

NewEnglandlazurlu
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A Mountain Paradise
4 posted 2002-08-22 08:37 PM


Steamy write here Sue .... I need to go take a cold shower after reading this one!

Marti

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5 posted 2002-08-22 09:08 PM




(sigh) Ooohhhhh...I love this, this is soooooo warm but sooooo romantic too, I love it, you always write true passion and beauty so well, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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Canada eh.
6 posted 2002-08-22 09:18 PM


Wonderfully sensual write Sue!
Enjoyed the read tonight...oh yes!
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

mycafe
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7 posted 2002-08-22 09:48 PM


Simply sensually beautiful, simply love this!!!!

marie

Keep counting your blessings

Goodknight
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8 posted 2002-08-26 12:07 PM


a wonderfully sensual poem - evokes powerful and exciting feelings - loved it - Paul
Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
9 posted 2002-08-26 12:16 PM


Suetang - very romantic read this morning...

BC

Gabriel Frost
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Between midnight thoughts
10 posted 2002-08-26 12:58 PM


Stunningly passionate, great job!
Madame Chipmunk
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11 posted 2002-08-26 01:36 PM


I love the sensuality in this one, Sue...
A lovely love poem...  You write your passion so well.
~ hugs from a chipmunk friend">

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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