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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-08-22 06:35 PM



This Ache

I had
forgotten
all about it
but you
taught it
to me
once again
taught me
to feel
this aching
uncontrollable
throb
this ache
that can’t be
dismissed
all purpose
consuming
distractions
do not
mask it
and there
it is
waiting
for curing power
in another’s
touch
to be satisfied

© Copyright 2002 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
Magnus
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1 posted 2002-08-22 06:53 PM


Yeeow....this would certainly distract one
from their daily toils....YEP...me thinks
very much....

Like this one Helen, nice...

Moonlight Romeo
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The heart of you
2 posted 2002-08-23 12:28 PM


The touch that stops the heart and fills the body and mind.

Thank you.

What light through yon window breaks?  It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

WhiteRose
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since 2002-07-23
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somebody's dungeon
3 posted 2002-08-23 12:54 PM


Yes, I've had this ache too. Nice write.
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