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Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now

0 posted 2002-08-22 01:26 PM


“MY FRIEND’S DATE (con’t)”
by
Bill Charles
~~~~
Wrote a poem a while back,
about my friend, and his date…
If you remember correctly,
was in AL, that’s to abbreviate…

Lost he was, in them thar hills,
with his date Mary Lynn Bob…
Out in the deepest of the woods,
with his only real heartthrob…

Those hill folk were mighty upset,
an outsider coming into their mist…
Taking off with this young woman,
so they put him on the blacklist…

Now here they were in the woods,
calling me for help, on that phone…
I was one thousand miles away,
knowing they were feeling alone…

I don’t want to finish this right now,
there’s more to come of this story…
So please come back one more time,
next episode from BC, yours truly…
~~~~


© Copyright 2002 Bill Charles - All Rights Reserved
Joyce Johnson
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1 posted 2002-08-22 01:35 PM


Glad I don't have to wait too long.  Joyce
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2 posted 2002-08-22 03:33 PM




(giggles in delight) Oh my gosh, this sounds so exciting, let's hope they don't get lost by the time you drive halfway across the nation! LOL! This is wonderful, sweet friend, I do remember Part 1 and this is excellent, I'm about to read the conclusion now, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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3 posted 2002-08-22 04:00 PM


BC, don't keep me waiting too long ... I love these kind of stories.

Marti

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