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WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

0 posted 2002-08-22 12:22 PM

In rememberance comes pain
tears in drops like rain,
a gray sort of feeling
waiting for the healing.

The heart is not ready
the thoughts too heavy,
to give up their hold
until the story's told.

Again and again
the movie plays on end,
romance glorified
While I am horrified.

Forgetfulness won't come
I guess it does for some,
instead a specter haunting
incessant in it's taunting.

I beg for lapse of thought
just a moment soft
in peace without the cry
let this memory finally die.

WhiteRose

Touch me with your whispers,
and I'll listen with my heart.

Magician
Member

since 2002-08-14

Posts 126

1 posted 2002-08-22 12:25 PM

I beg for lapse of thought
just a moment soft
in peace without the cry
let this memory finally die

I truly love this verse and can totally relate. Amazing.

Thomas119gold
Senior Member

since 2002-06-03

Posts 708
Biloxi, MS (city by the sea)

2 posted 2002-08-22 12:30 PM

Now how am I supposed to keep up with all the poems you are putting out
I am new to this
instead of speed reading I think I will buy some speed typing books

I really do enjoy all your poems I can relate to a lot of them
Thomas

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

3 posted 2002-08-22 01:10 PM

The heart is not ready
the thoughts too heavy,
to give up their hold
until the story's told.

Very true and very much enjoyed. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2002-08-22 06:39 PM

I feel the sadness and pain of this one. You know where I am.

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

5 posted 2002-08-22 07:37 PM

Hello Anne

I could feel the pain and sorrow through your words and I guess some things we just can't block out of our mind, they keep resurfacing. I hope you are okay.

Take care....Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

NewEnglandlazurlu
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-01-04

Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise

6 posted 2002-08-22 08:33 PM

This was a wonderful piece and all I could think about when I was reading it was September 11th.

Some things we just can't forget.

Hugs, Marti

"Even if life is full of thorns,
I still embrace it, for I know
that in between those thorns,
there is a rose worth all the pain."

mycafe
Senior Member

since 2002-05-23

Posts 584

7 posted 2002-08-22 09:58 PM

Seems like you've spoken my thoughts today, WhiteRose. This is such a keeper!

mycafe

Keep counting your blessings

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

8 posted 2002-09-16 12:07 PM

this is too true, too true, and I am relating well right now...gotta push this one through again

WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

9 posted 2002-09-16 12:26 PM

Dixie, I'm still there. Remembering, though the thoughts are now faded and few. Thanks for the *bump*

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