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Natural High
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Natural High |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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Sunlight filters through the trees the wind whispers on the breeze. Through yon mountains blinding haze my mind drifts off in dreamy daze. The breeze gently strokes my face I'm held in tranquil of this place. Escaping into far off dreams of forests green and blue streams, rolling rivers flow through grassy hills sights and sounds the whiporwill. Rainbows arching in the sky life complete, a natural high. somebody tell me, please help me.... understand.......(as sung by Trace Adkins) {on the wings of words are spirits fly...and our souls are free~me [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (08-22-2002 04:31 PM).] |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
You have painted a wonderland. I love the flow it has. Nice and relaxed. Great Job! |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Oh Donna, this is sooooooo beautiful, I love it, may rainbows and sunshine always fill your heart, this is breathtaking, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Yep, those natural highs are the best! They go way beyond coffee, but I guess coffee gets my eyes open so I can see them.  Enjoyed this. Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
A soft and lovely read. Enjoyed. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Thomas119gold Senior Member
since 2002-06-03
Posts 708Biloxi, MS (city by the sea) |
Well I just checked with my travel agent and she said this vacation package is no longer offered. So your words will at least help me relax with wonderful thoughts Thomas |
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Magician Member
since 2002-08-14
Posts 126 |
This truly brings me back to nature reading this. Thank you. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Gentle Spirit - now this sounds like a great place to be... BC |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Gentle one, I've always thought life had a natural high, the best there is. Loved this! *hugs* |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
This is beautiful Donna. I enjoyed it very much. |
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Diane Coway Member
since 2002-08-01
Posts 61USA |
Donna, Words so true, that are so full of wisdom. If ones stops to smell the roses they sense this natural high. The beauty of nature can not be done just by just word, but WOW you sure succeeded to do so. Take care, Coway |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
I never tire, from reading all you give....  Lauren~ The ocean looks like a thousand diamonds strewn across a blue blanket |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Just quickly popping in to say Good morning and thanks to all. As soon as my ISP wants to co-operate with me and get a little faster today I will hopefully be able to return and reply to each of you, but in the meantime, I just wanted ya'll to know how appreciated you are!! Hey Ya'll have a great morning!! (or evening, or afternoon, or whatever the case might be where you are. ) Hugs and peace to poetry land. Donna somebody tell me, please help me.... |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sunlight...rainbows...natural highs... what better way to start the day? |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
ahhhh...very peaceful. keep on painting. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
What an enjoyable read! Now I feel ready to face the day! Wonderful write! ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Kris, it was a very relaxing moment. Thank you. Noah, you are a joy. Thanks. Vas, I sure need that coffee too, but sometimes the sunlight does the trick too. Chris, thanks hon and take care. Thomas there's an idea. They should package vacations like this. Thanks. Magician it is good to visit Mother Earth often. Thanks Bill, it IS a great place to be. Thanks. Michael I don't think there is any better "high" that one can get. Thanks. Rose, so glad you enjoyed it. Thanks. Diane, I am more at home with nature than most other things. At times I believe that I should have been living in the great wilderness. Thank you. Lauren, if you find that I have given something through my words then I am truly blessed. thank you dear  Sunshine, I can't think of a much better way to start the day than to see dreams come true. Thanks bunches. Dixie, so glad that you stopped by to take in the view! Thank you so much for looking at the picture. Hugs. Nancy, heres to hoping that the day is good to you! Hugs. somebody tell me, please help me.... |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Beautiful poem. Sounds like a wonderful place to be. |
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FLScarlet Junior Member
since 2002-08-21
Posts 16 |
You took me to those places.. loved the write! Thanks! Scarlet |
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