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Thomas119gold
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since 2002-06-03
Posts 708
Biloxi, MS (city by the sea)

0 posted 2002-08-21 05:01 PM



Oh, crazy Cupid, what have you done to me?
I am blind I cannot see.
I cannot look right or left for I lose sight.

However, the beautiful scene that sits before me does deserve my full attention.

Oh, Cupid, you are a sneaky one.
Here I was sitting all alone
then you drive this arrow of love
deep into my heart.

Now I am frantic and in a frenzy
over a woman.
A WOMAN!

That is right a woman, not a car or a boat
or some macho manly toy,
but an elegant, sexy woman

Cupid, answer me this are
you accurate in your shot?
That is what I was afraid of hearing.
Oh well, there goes my nights out with the guys.


By Thomas Goldsworthy
(The Cupids arrow goes BINK! when it leaves the bow.)

© Copyright 2002 Thomas Goldsworthy - All Rights Reserved
Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

1 posted 2002-08-21 05:04 PM


not only is this to cute, it is also very true in content.  Very good writing, I enjoyed it.  *s*

somebody tell me, please help me....
understand.......(as sung by Trace Adkins)

{on the wings of words are spirits fly...and our souls are free~me

Thomas119gold
Senior Member
since 2002-06-03
Posts 708
Biloxi, MS (city by the sea)
2 posted 2002-08-21 05:07 PM


Very true thank you
Enchantress
Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
3 posted 2002-08-21 05:07 PM


Enjoyed the read today very much!
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace
4 posted 2002-08-21 05:11 PM


how sweet...helen
Honeybee
Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA
5 posted 2002-08-21 11:39 PM


Well this is a stereotypical 'man' poem if ever I read one
Loved that last verse...too, too cute!

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

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