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Cast away |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855
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You wrapped me in paper glass, the ripple words of sea. The ocean waves reflected touch, its facet hands of soaking sand. Lifted me like coal of coast and sank me to the bottom. I could see the underside of storms unmarked, unsaid. Left among the black below of beauty stars long dead. I could see the showing seams, still moonlight suspended. A shimmer shiver wave or two or three or four hundred. Cast away to find the tide. I left it there instead. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Left among the black below of beauty stars long dead. I could see the showing seams, still moonlight suspended. A shimmer shiver wave or two or three or four hundred. Cast away to find the tide. I left it there instead. wow Mike, you writing is always so intense. Enjoyed the view. somebody tell me, please help me.... |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
You DO have the sea within you, don't you? Loved the silvered purple swell and surge. ~Ed In reply to "which way do we go?", the answer was never "straight", but, "progressively forward". |
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Anvrill Senior Member
since 2002-06-21
Posts 710in the interzone now |
Honey-baby, your words are amazing. As are you. Immer. i'll be waiting for you |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
your's is a voice of sad reverence for what the mind's eye sees writing like the water moon still brian I never aimed at reality; I aimed at truth. --Orson Welles |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Well now you went and did it, BSQ. You made me stop at every line, just to take it in. When each line/sentence can stand alone like you have accomplished here, you have a  !! |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Thank you, all my friends. |
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WhileIWasGone Member
since 2002-07-18
Posts 486 |
Very very Beautiful.....love it. DeaDiAmore |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Much appreciated, DiDiAmond. |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Your title drew me in and your imagery brought a smile. Thank you!  |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
leaves me with many questions, but convinces me so i need not ask is a beach somehow a part of this in one way or another? |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Michael, this is soooooo beautiful, I love it, your wonderful words always twinkle with such adventurous beauty, this is a true keeper, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Michael, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
E v e r y s i n g l e l i n e was absolutely stunning, Mr.Squirrel... You are an amazingly talanted rodent...  ~ furry rodent hugsLyra |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Thanks! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Left among the black below of beauty stars long dead. I could see the showing seams, still moonlight suspended. A shimmer shiver wave or two or three or four hundred. Cast away to find the tide. I left it there instead. ============================= I do believe the ocean is inside you somewhere..the imagery in this is your usual superb...Im playing catch up..reading your posts from the past few days...my time here of late is less...just know I read your every word...the duet you and Lori did was awesome...ya need to do that more more more  In the space between now and then |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Glad to know you're still liking my words, Butterfly Slippers. I'm still liking yours, too. Mikey |
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