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Quietly Listening......
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Quietly Listening...... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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 Quietly Listening…. trying to shut out everyday sounds for I feel that you’re somewhere, around in the great dense come forth in murmur I lean forward a little more sure that if I lean into this fond voice then that is where I’ll find my choice… is it then, my conscience speaking for what was lost or what I’m seeking, or is it voice of angels come or just a fly or mosquito’s hum? where do these thoughts come some unbidden, as if from deep source in my past well hidden? what have I not given amend thereto? should I go to knee duly bend for you? is it a bit of common sense that I hold forth now in recompense? is it an angel to guard my moves to fit me in a way of safe groove? or is God trying to get my ear is He calling to me “listen, my Dear…” might someone give me the key to open up this great mystery of these voices and feelings vast do they stem from present … or past? but with the voice comes the feel of hands touching of a … surreal … of a bond, a hope, a guarantee, and it warms the heart of me, it wraps the whole of me, encompassing the fine of me… yes, it’s in the Voice I hear, so I keep it close, and very near I try to shut out the everyday sounds as I feel you’re somewhere, around and I choose to believe, my dear, that you are my angel, standing quite near…. dedicated to all the poets, here. ~*~ Photo by: KRJ |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Aww, this is lovely Karilea, thankyou. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
but with the voice comes the feel of hands touching of a … surreal … of a bond, a hope, a guarantee, and it warms the heart of me, it wraps the whole of me, encompassing the fine of me… yes, it’s in the Voice I hear, so I keep it close, and very near I try to shut out the everyday sounds as I feel you’re somewhere, around and I choose to believe, my dear, that you are my angel, standing quite near…. This is how passions makes me feel. The kindred spirits in the circle ever strong. Beautiful Karilea, and thank you. somebody tell me, please help me.... |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Exactly, and then some.  |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Sunshine - I agree, this is a most lovely write... BC |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I feel the same way as well... Excellent write m'dear!! ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Oh Karilea, you truly are family to us all in some way as we are all happy to be like second brothers and sisters to you! (smiles) This is beautiful, sweet friend, I know just how you feel, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Listening to the voices soft upon the hay of treasured loft Listening to the souls penned of thoughts in flow of wind. Listening to the beat of hearts when words become read by all Knowing this is where it starts before we stumble or we fall. Giving us each a moment when the words flow well of the pen. Letting us share a tender thought knowing not...what each is wrought. Hold us each within your rays where magic of word sighing sways Hold us to your bosom, your breast for in this place, it all is best. |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
this really IS a great place... a good place to clean the closet when nobodys there to help you |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
You've captured our essence so well here, Karilea...  ~ loving hugsLyra |
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Alicia Member
since 2002-03-22
Posts 279 |
~Reading you,... |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea An open heart has the gift touching...like you do. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
well, I'm speechless. Thanks so much, very beautiful work, love the picture too! They sort of look like my two girls...14 and 10. [This message has been edited by passing shadows (08-22-2002 04:59 AM).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thank you to all who read this...the words themselves, and the picture, especially the picture, has a very special place in my heart... |
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