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Elizabeth Santos
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0 posted 2002-08-21 09:36 AM


Enchantment

When moonlight combs her golden hair
And bathes the room with mystic air
Each movement burning in delight
Of skin adorned in pearly white

When sparkling blaze has touched his eye
From heaven’s candle in the sky
And laid a luminescent glaze
Across a lover’s ravished gaze

Both hearts succumb to moon’s embrace
'Til dawning purples take its place

Elizabeth Santos

[This message has been edited by Elizabeth Santos (08-21-2002 11:17 AM).]

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Gentle Spirit
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1 posted 2002-08-21 09:38 AM


Liz, deep sigh, this is so very beautiful!  A lovely write and so well written.  Hugs

somebody tell me, please help me....
understand.......(as sung by Trace Adkins)

{on the wings of words are spirits fly...and our souls are free~me

Sudhir Iyer
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2 posted 2002-08-21 09:41 AM


Ah... this is lovely... beautifully written...

Regards to you Liz,
Sudhir

Blue Kitty
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3 posted 2002-08-21 09:45 AM


Oh this is so lovely, enchanting places are best when shared with enchanting people, sound as if you made some majical times with this poem

P.

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4 posted 2002-08-21 07:45 PM


You do sonnets so beautifully, Liz. UP to the top with this one.
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5 posted 2002-08-21 08:39 PM




(smiles) Oh Elizabeth, this is sooooooo beautiful, I love it, such light and imagery always fills your gorgeous words, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Elizabeth, thank you for sharing!



May love and light alwyas shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Enchantress
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6 posted 2002-08-21 08:49 PM


Simply enchanting Elizabeth!
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 2002-08-21 09:08 PM


Elizabeth,
The tender of lovely. Sy

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8 posted 2002-08-21 09:17 PM


When moonlight combs her golden hair
And bathes the room with mystic air
Each movement burning in delight
Of skin adorned in pearly white

Beautiful Elizabeth!! Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Honeybee
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9 posted 2002-08-21 09:21 PM



Liz, this is so beautiful...your pen is flawless!

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

Madame Chipmunk
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10 posted 2002-08-21 11:42 PM


Another poetic treat from your pen, Liz
~ poetic hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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