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Packratmike
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0 posted 2002-08-21 02:11 AM


in glowing dust of stars debris
through frozen voids of time and space
one day i'll sail that cosmic sea
with smile of awe upon my face

through frozen voids of time and space
and every galaxy I cross
with smile of awe upon my face
i'll never count a moment lost

and every galaxy I cross
a journey toward eternal grace
I'll never count a moment lost
to find a home in God's embrace

a journey toward eternal grace
one day i'll sail that cosmic sea
to find a home in God's embrace
in glowing dust of stars debris


© Copyright 2002 Mike Powers - All Rights Reserved
Duncan
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1 posted 2002-08-21 02:15 AM


through frozen voids of time and space
and every galaxy I cross
with smile of awe upon my face
i'll never count a moment lost

Very cool verse.  Really liked the 'peace' of it.

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Gaia
2 posted 2002-08-21 02:41 AM


BRAVO!
I like this style, and the message is really cool.

Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2002-08-21 02:47 AM




(smiles) Oh Mike, this is an excellent pantoum, I LOVE IT, we are all truly made of stars and when the time is right we will flow freely there as now may we all embrace all beneath the stars that is beautiful! (big hugggssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Mike, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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4 posted 2002-08-23 12:38 PM


The soul goes home every night.  Until it never wakes again, and for the first time.

Thank you.

What light through yon window breaks?  It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

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