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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2002-08-20 09:19 PM






~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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catalinamoon
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1 posted 2002-08-20 09:23 PM


Roses, and the moon you can't do better.
Lovely one.
Sandra

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2 posted 2002-08-20 09:33 PM


Beautiful moon, lovely roses and perfect poetry... all in one stupendous package...
Very excellent, Marge
~ hugs and roses

Lyra

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"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

Kethry
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3 posted 2002-08-20 09:44 PM


Marge,
I'm sure this was lovely, all of yours are but my old eyes had difficulty reading it.
Keth

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



SmartChick
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4 posted 2002-08-20 09:55 PM


This is soooo beautiful, Marge. And, I love the poem, too.
WhiteRose
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5 posted 2002-08-20 09:58 PM


This is a work of art Marge. Lovely beyond words.
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6 posted 2002-08-20 10:00 PM


Beautiful Marge...as always...
and almost a full moon tonight!
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

ethome
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7 posted 2002-08-20 10:29 PM


Beautiful scene and exquistie words to describe it!
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8 posted 2002-08-20 11:18 PM


Beautiful Marge~

I love how you write the moon...

HUGSSS Lady


Lauren~

The ocean looks like a thousand diamonds strewn across a blue blanket
I lean against the wind pretend I am weightless and in this moment I am happy

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9 posted 2002-08-20 11:43 PM


Margie girl darling sister of my soul and holder of the sky’s lights yet again this is so beautifully written I swear I can hear the moon sighing in delight. I certainly can see the beauty and feel the wonder flowing through my mind. Truly exquisite writing, every single time you write, I hear the words ripple though my soul, how well you know me beloved heart, excellent writing stunningly well written the way it flows from beginning to end in such lyrical beauty. I love it love it love it utterly utterly utterly.

This is simply gorgeous writing well done, fabulous image darling heart, utterly utterly fabulous

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the earthquake wind and fire

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10 posted 2002-08-21 12:30 PM


Marge... Just Beautiful. Thanks for sharing
this with us.
Thanks for your help on my project...Paul

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11 posted 2002-08-21 06:33 AM


Your writings on the moon are always so beautiful Marge, and this is another lil wonderful piece to add to the rest.  Well done.

somebody tell me, please help me....
understand.......(as sung by Trace Adkins)

{on the wings of words are spirits fly...and our souls are free~me

NewEnglandlazurlu
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12 posted 2002-08-21 06:51 AM


I can't tell you what a delight it was to wake up and find this magnificent and 'beautious' presentation of art and words waiting for me in my email!

What a treasure!  Hugs, Marti

Sudhir Iyer
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13 posted 2002-08-21 09:52 AM


My goodness... this is lovely...

regards, Marge,
sudhir

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14 posted 2002-08-21 11:33 AM


Hi Marge

I saw the moon last night and thought of you and how you must be loving it.  I wanted to write something about it, but my muse didn't want to...grrr.  

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15 posted 2002-08-21 11:39 AM


To think I almost missed this beautiful offering from our Marge. Enjoyed. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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16 posted 2002-08-21 12:44 PM


Marge: How lovely!  Makes me think of pink pearls for some reason.

Betty Lou Hebert

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17 posted 2002-08-21 01:44 PM



Beautiful...

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18 posted 2002-08-21 02:14 PM


Marge - these are most beautiful presentations, and also the poem is beautiful. What a nice flow to this...

BC

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19 posted 2002-08-21 03:58 PM


CatalinaMoon~
Thanks so much~
Last evening the moon was encircled by a 'rosy' skirt just like the graphic~
It was just sooooooo lovely it had to be written~

Lyra~
I sure appreciate that~

Kethry~
LOL .. honey child .. when you get to the States, we'd best get you to my favorite Optometrist~
I'm sure you would have enjoyed it dearest lady~

SweetSue~
Thanks honey ... she was a lovely, lovely view~

WhiteRose~
Thank you so very much~

Enchantress~
Thank you ... yes, she is on the rise~
I get so gosh-darned inspired every time I look at her~

ETHome~
Thanks my friend~

GreenEyes~
She definitely begs to be written~
Thank you~

MarshaMooner~
I just love you~

Paul~
Thank you so much~
It was really nice that you asked for me to help you on your 'project'~

GentleSpirit~
She sure gives me lots of inspire~
I appreciate knowing you like them~
Thank you~

Marti~
Now why did I kind of 'know' you'd like this piece ?
Thanks gal ... glad your 'wake-up' was better than mine today~
Me gonna get all better~  I promise~

Sudhir~
Thank you sweetie ... and yours was such a treat to read~
Glad to see you~

MartieSis~
Well girlfriend .... I'm glad I got to capture the mood for BOTH of us~
She was stupendous ... delicatly adorned~
Thank you sweetie~

NightShade~
Well ... I'm sure glad you didn't miss it too~
Thank you soooooooooooo much~

BettyLou~
Hmmmmmm ?  Could be .... she actually looked to me like she was twirling in the most beautiful 'tutu' of rosy pink~
AND the graphic had just popped up in my e-mail a few days ago !
How lucky is that ?
Thank you so much dear friend~

Karilea~
Thank you~

BillCharles~
You and I both seem to have an admiration for the loveliness of her charms~
Nice poem you just did, Bill ... I'll get on it in a bit~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~



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20 posted 2002-08-21 04:25 PM


Yammean THIS is what's hiding up there beyond all the storm clouds? *G* How lovely! *S*
Titia Geertman
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21 posted 2002-08-21 05:25 PM



How did you know I saw that moon last night, it only had changed its color into yellowbrownish and was hiding a bit behind a cloud.

You know I love moons, specially yours

HUGS, I've neglected you a bit I think and all others

Titia

Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

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22 posted 2002-08-21 08:36 PM


Marge,  you always know exactly when the full
moon has come to us...

And your poetry always paints a very wonderful
picture of the moon....slightly in rose
as I write...

Marge Tindal
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23 posted 2002-08-21 09:08 PM


*Friends~
I just came in from gazing at her absolutely GORGEOUS BEAUTY~
Oh ... the sky is an Indigo crystal backdrop for her prancing tonight~

SuthernGal~
Ohhhhhh, I hope it's cleared so you can see her~
Oh my ... what a sky !

Titia~
Dear .... just knowing we share the beauty of the moon brings you closer and closer to my heart~

Magnus~
Awwwww, thank you so much~
She is sure putting on a show tonight~
Love n' lots of *MoonHUGS*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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