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Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

0 posted 2002-08-20 04:03 PM

Tiffany Mermaids
By: Noah Eaton
8/20/02

Stained-glass pirouettes
Storm depths of the lush south sea
Mysteriously

Tiffany mermaids
Brushing hair with coral combs
Watching the sunrise

Strumming cembalos
In dracaena palaces
Ushering Neptune

Chinese water lilies
Braiding their fair hair
For their serene Prom

In full moon fever
Mermaids screech their mating calls
Through heavens conch shell...

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (08-20-2002 04:09 PM).]

Munda
Member Elite

since 1999-10-08

Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands

1 posted 2002-08-20 04:10 PM

Sigh - such a lovely write Noah!

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

2 posted 2002-08-20 04:35 PM

Noah - beautiful mermaid write...

BC

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

3 posted 2002-08-20 04:43 PM

Brushing hair with coral combs

Noah, this is wonderful and the picture is lovely too. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Singing Sparrow
Member

since 2002-05-12

Posts 94

4 posted 2002-08-21 08:34 PM

hey, how did this get so far down, back up you go!

SS

[This message has been edited by Singing Sparrow (08-21-2002 08:35 PM).]

ShadowRider
Senior Member

since 2001-07-14

Posts 1038
USA

5 posted 2002-08-22 07:24 AM

such sharp descriptions, Noah, buddy!
You make a believer of me, that's fer shure!
Your lines are always so original and thoughtful. Enjoyed the abbreviated lines
in this immensely!
Talk to ya soon, K?
Jeff

NewEnglandlazurlu
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-01-04

Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise

6 posted 2002-08-22 08:50 PM

I think I need to take a trip to the Carribean or the South Seas. I enjoyed this very much Noah. Great writing and I love the soft pastel colors.

Hugs, Marti

"Even if life is full of thorns,
I still embrace it, for I know
that in between those thorns,
there is a rose worth all the pain."

mycafe
Senior Member

since 2002-05-23

Posts 584

7 posted 2002-08-22 09:53 PM

Absolutely LOVELY!!!

mycafe

Keep counting your blessings

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