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His World
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His World |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands 
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Everything was alright in his world so he thought… no matter how many times she talked with him his world was still ok slowly her marriage died while his marriage was still ok he thought… then one day she moved out too late he realized he’d lost his world… |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A world of his own in which he lived as he forgot to gift the give... |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
A very wise commentary on life, Neeraja... Its amazing how some people just take life and love so much for granted that they don't notice when things are coming apart...  ~ hugs for sharing a very thought provoking writeLyra |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Neeraja, this too breaks my heart to see people left so insecure when they don't know of the love that is fading away. (sad sigh) This is powerfull sad, sweet friend, my heart goes out to all who feel this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Neeraja, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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