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WhiteRose
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since 2002-07-23
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somebody's dungeon

0 posted 2002-08-20 10:53 AM



Today the mail
brought passion sweet
from my true love
erotic heat
a simple letter
just words on page
but oh the fire
now does rage.

I miss his touch
I miss his lips
I miss the moist
the warmth of kiss.

Today the mail
brought him close
lustfilled words
true passion prose
I need him now
here next to me
love in his eyes
sparkling to see.

Oh for the time
when he is near
whispering desire
into my ear.

WhiteRose

Touch me with your whispers,
and I'll listen with my heart.

© Copyright 2002 Anne Thompson - All Rights Reserved
Goodknight
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since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386
Ohio, USA
1 posted 2002-08-20 10:59 AM


your words offer all the passion associated with longing for closeness - a powerful emotional write - enjoyed it lots - paul
Neeraja
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since 2002-06-22
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The Netherlands
2 posted 2002-08-20 11:05 AM


Sigh... beautiful words of longing... I recognize the feeling...

Neeraja

Madame Chipmunk
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since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296
Michigan
3 posted 2002-08-20 12:38 PM


What a beautiful expression of longing, Anne...
I hope you get to see him soon.
~ hugging you gently

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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4 posted 2002-08-20 12:45 PM




(smiles) Oh Anne, I sure do hope you and him meet, this sounds so beautiful and you deserve the greatest happiness of all! (kiss on cheek) This is touching, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Anne, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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