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Magician
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0 posted 2002-08-20 08:57 AM


In dark dreams therein lay truth’s biggest lie
Where blessed joy with fervent bliss give way
To thoughts of despair, entrapped by closed eyes
Both equal and pure as night is to day
Veiled horror at what was held, now lost
Upon waking in morning’s bright new dawn
To return to the dream at any cost
Before all hope of a love shared is gone
Then to learn that love was there all the while
Its presence thy mind hath barely contained
Exposed for what it is behind a smile
And within, the source shall ever remain

What, in depths of dark sleep from love lost brings,
Such is love known by all these tell-tale things


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1 posted 2002-08-20 09:02 AM



A most beautiful sonnet, sir...
what a blessing to find this on
as beautiful a morning...

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2 posted 2002-08-20 09:03 AM


Oh yes...'To sleep, perchance to dream.'
Very very nice Magician!
Enjoyed the morning read...
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

Magician
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3 posted 2002-08-20 09:09 AM


Thank you sunshine, its beautiful here too.

Enchantress, thank you for the kind words. Glad I did something good this morning. *S*

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4 posted 2002-08-20 01:23 PM




(smiles) Oh Magician, this is soooooo beautiful, I love it, your wonderful words of love are always inspiring, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Magician, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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5 posted 2002-09-05 11:57 PM


wow, had to read this three times, and it got deeper each time...I think I've fallen and can't get up...forgive me, I've been up since 5 am and I'm a bit sleepy now
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