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CSKpoet
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Island in Paradise

0 posted 2002-08-20 04:47 AM



Effervescent fountains mingle
With curved crystalline rivers
In a climatic rush to vast ocean blue
Where tides move in motion
Waves of passionate emotion
In a sensual lovers rendezvous

Mountains touch the heavens high
Sunlight warmly kisses the tender earth
Bright silvery moonbeams caress the sky
But a kiss is so much more between you and I
Your kiss .. a valuable treasure of priceless worth

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

© Copyright 2002 Cheryl Stewart Koomoa - All Rights Reserved
Paul Wilson
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1 posted 2002-08-20 05:47 AM


CSKpoet...To come together as fountains and rivers mingle.
that paints a very lovely picture
Enjoyed the poem...Paul

Sudhir Iyer
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2 posted 2002-08-20 05:57 AM


nice imagery... nice poetry

regards,
sudhir

tracie66
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3 posted 2002-08-20 06:27 AM


wonderful array of beautiful words, well penned...lovely visual piece.
~hugs~
Tracie

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



Gentle Spirit
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4 posted 2002-08-20 06:34 AM


But a kiss is so much more between you and I
Your kiss .. a valuable treasure of priceless worth

Cheryl, it should always be this way with the one you love.  This is beautiful.

somebody tell me, please help me....
understand.......(as sung by Trace Adkins)

{on the wings of words are spirits fly...and our souls are free~me

Mistletoe Angel
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5 posted 2002-08-20 04:59 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, I just love this, sweet friend, I believe a kiss must be the most beautiful feeling in the world, I still haven't had my first kiss but dream so much of sharing it with my Joanna! (kiss on cheek) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Cheryl, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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