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Krishankins
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0 posted 2002-08-19 10:56 PM



My heart sways slowly to your tender love
Like amber grains dancing on wind
The harvest moonlight shines soft from your eyes
Don't blink, love, please don't let this end

A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground

© Copyright 2002 Kristopher Hankins - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-08-19 11:00 PM




(big hugggsssss) Oh Kristopher, this is so beautifully sentimental, sweet friend, I wish for true loves bliss to always fill your heart and make you happy forever! (sigh)This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kristopher, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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2 posted 2002-08-19 11:30 PM


Ah very nicely penned Kris!
Love this unique style of yours.
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

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3 posted 2002-08-19 11:43 PM


Now that was the most romantic thing I have read in a while, and would I ever like a bracelet with that on it Lovely!

The most valuable thing you own is a smile, wear it, and share it.
Sharon    

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4 posted 2002-09-06 11:22 AM


very nice....  
gotta love romance in the moonlight

~~ Connie ~~

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5 posted 2002-09-06 11:25 AM


Very good ... and I've never heard of a heart made analgous to wheat ... unique

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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6 posted 2002-09-06 11:31 AM


This is incredibly, I mean INCREDIBLY romantic. Your loving and gentle nature comes shining through in this poem.

Linda

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7 posted 2002-09-06 12:04 PM


I remember dancing under a harvest moon. It seems so long ago. Well said, Kris.
Sandra

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8 posted 2002-09-06 02:35 PM


lovely images. enjoyed.  

Battle not with monsters lest ye become a monster, and if you gaze into the abyss, the abyss gazes also into you. - Friedrich W. Nietzsche

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Take a bow, man!

Sincerely,
Titus

"I'll prepare myself, and one day my time will come."
            -Abraham Lincoln

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10 posted 2002-09-07 01:09 AM


Madden.... great quote. Once read it on a fantastic book detailing the profession of chasing serial killers, of profiling them - by the man credited with inventing the very business of profiling, and the phrase 'serial killer.' Once again, great quote.

Sincerely,
Titus

"I'll prepare myself, and one day my time will come."
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