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Marsha
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0 posted 2002-08-19 09:49 PM


Whispering Heart

Whisper my name in a softened sigh
Then send it riding the wind flying high
In the depths the very heart of me
I’ll feel your warmth here flowing so freely
The touch of you fills me with love’s light
So I live forever wrapped in star’s light
Send me the touch of your lover’s heat
To inflame me and fire my heartbeat

Caress my mouth with your fingertips
In our souls dance we match each sway of hips
Build the fire, as you know how to do
Take me into heat’s night along with you
Miles disappear as we dance in mind
On the floor of love our heat we find
Come feed the flames that hold me to you
Can you taste my soul that is pouring through?

Sigh into my soul with lover’s touch
Breathe the words that say I want you so much
Tell me that I’m the one who frees you
And the only voice your soul answers too
Wrap my soul in yours and hold me tight
And stay with me throughout the dark of night
I’ll spend eternity loving you
While we cherish a love that’s ever true

Whispering hearts dancing to one beat
United in love and bathed by love’s heat

Marsha


Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the earthquake wind and fire

© Copyright 2002 Marsha Grace Melody Todd - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-08-19 09:57 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is sooooooo romantic, sweet friend, and may your heart forever whisper in his in eternal happiness! (kiss on cheek) This is beautiful and sentimental, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marsha, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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2 posted 2002-08-19 11:47 PM


~Whew~ now that is what I call an ignitable whisper! Very romantic and sensual inspiration...utterly breathtaking.
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3 posted 2002-08-20 12:11 PM


You write the most beautiful love poems, Marsha...
They all sound like the voice of experience, also...
~ hugs from my underground burrow

Lyra

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"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

Krissy
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4 posted 2002-08-20 01:17 PM


Mum excellent writing it was very strong. This poem is really one of your best yet.  The poem reminds me of one of my old boyfriends I used to have very clingly so I got rid of him.YOU never fail to write well and this is outstanding. Beautiful work, exquisite writing, I’m keeping this it is so very very special

Very well written


love and warm stuff
as always
Krissy


And while thy willing soul transpiers
at every pore with instant fires
Andrew Marvell 1621-1678

[This message has been edited by Krissy (08-20-2002 03:05 PM).]

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Deep in the heart
5 posted 2002-08-20 01:42 PM


M a r s h a

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6 posted 2002-08-20 02:43 PM


Marsha - very romantic you write. Like these from you...

BC

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7 posted 2002-08-20 05:50 PM


Mushy,  I have missed all of your words...
You write them so beautifully, so very
passionately....Like the heat of a
thousand suns coming together as one...

Utterly so...

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8 posted 2002-08-20 06:31 PM


enjoyed
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9 posted 2002-08-20 07:28 PM


Hello Marsha

Once again you weave magic with your beautiful words of love and desire.  This was simply stunning and I felt myself being swept away with the moment.

Take care......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

Marsha
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10 posted 2002-08-20 07:52 PM


Krissy darling daughter mine xxx

I’m trying to remember its so hard to do
The number of men who’ve romanced you
I recall Michael, he was a tragic sort
What was the name of that disease he caught?
That rash looked bad that and the red eyes
Oh I remember that was from your goodbyes

And then there was Pete, poor lad
Did you ever tell him that he’d been had?
Why did you tell all your friends his nickname?
I swear that boy was never quite the same!
I don’t remember that odd twitch before
Why did you call him Never once more

Jason I recall him, that boy was dim
Did you ever really get to talk to him?
Do you remember he couldn’t find his way?
Now darling girl that isn’t what I meant to say
I meant he was as thick as two short planks
I’m not surprised you told him no thanks

David was he the rugger nut with big thighs?
I know you only enjoyed his ummm sighs
No Krissy I don’t think I ever saw him play
All I remember is he didn’t have a lot to say
What was he doing when I came in that night?
Ahh demonstrating the tackle that caused a fight!

Watch out Florida’s she’s coming to see you
Who knows where you’ll be when she’s through


Love you always
And forever
Mum
Ahh my little cabbages xx You know i love you wots more xx



Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the earthquake wind and fire

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