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dj29 Junior Member
since 2002-08-19
Posts 13Florida |
Thinking of you makes me sigh And all i can do is wonder why Leaving me batterd, scared, and confused I feel so lonly, sad, and used I wonder why you do the things that you do Did i not try to give my world to you? Now i sit with my heart in two Because of the love i had for you I never wanted any of this I wanted our lives full of love and bliss Thinking about the times we had it makes me cry, and leaves me sad So if you leave me here and today Please take to heart what i have to say Remember the good times that we shared together In good, bad, and all kinds of weather Think of what you wanted to do When I told you how much i loved you If you leave me my world falls apart but you know youll always be in my heart "Twither tis nobler in the mind to suffer the slings and arrows of outrageous fourtune........or to take arms up against a sea of troubles....and in o |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Daniel~ I don't have the answer ... but you said it very poetically~ Welcome to Passions~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss( Oh Daniel, this is so very sad, my heart goes out to you and I hope this is fictional to your own feelings but if it isn't, know love will always find a way and even if she isn't the one that you will always have a special friend out of it and true love will find you! (sigh) This is sadly touching, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Daniel, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Hi Daniel...Welcome to Passions.. Quite the sad post here... hope things get better for you. ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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dj29 Junior Member
since 2002-08-19
Posts 13Florida |
Thank you so much for the comments  Unfourtantly yes this was based on my feelings but that was over a year ago when i wrote this poem but just latly I found out from a friend about passions Thank you again for the comments and I look forward to reading more "I still believe, in spite of everything, that people are truly good at heart" ~Anne Frank, Diary entry from 15 July 1944. |
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