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Duncan
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0 posted 2002-08-19 01:56 PM




Called in sick (though, I’m not)
shhh, don’t tell
come on
spend the day with me
I got Chunky Monkey ice cream
Pringles
and this really good vodka
that I discovered recently
even got a few beers in the frig
we’ll watch silly romantic comedies
just ‘cause they make me think of you
I’ll tell you about
the dream I had last night
come on
spend the day with me
they can live without you for a day
I can’t

© Copyright 2002 Duncan - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2002-08-19 02:01 PM



Afternoon delights begin with that very request...
Enjoyed this one, Duncan!

Bill Charles
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2 posted 2002-08-19 02:11 PM


Duncan - a'hhhh yes, delightful afternoon...

BC

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3 posted 2002-08-19 03:22 PM


Okay Duncan...sounds like fun!
Meet you on your porch?
~Hugs~

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  So you won't ever forget me ~

Mistletoe Angel
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4 posted 2002-08-19 03:27 PM




(smiles) Yay, this sounds like so much fun, you could use your backyard as an amphitheatre and play romantic movies and have stadium seating on your porch, Yay!!! (big hugggssssss) This is delightful, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Duncan, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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5 posted 2002-08-19 03:46 PM


Ive done that before Nice though enjoyed reading.

If your afraid of the dark, then why did you come?

catalinamoon
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6 posted 2002-08-19 06:42 PM


What a lovely request. I hope she said yes.
Sandra

Christopher
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7 posted 2002-08-19 06:50 PM


smilin' here
quote:
I got Chunky Monkey ice cream
Pringles
and this really good vodka
that I discovered recently

tres cool - this is honest, i like!

cool poem, nice idea done up different. oh - "frig" should probably be "fridge"

C

Christopher
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8 posted 2002-08-19 06:51 PM


oh, honest, but it also sounds like a stomach ache waiting to happen!
Janet Marie
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9 posted 2002-08-19 07:13 PM


come on
spend the day with me
they can live without you for a day
I can't
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Oh...you're sick allright...and ya got it real bad....but its soooo good


Madame Chipmunk
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10 posted 2002-08-19 08:07 PM


Sweetly romantic, Duncan...
love and Chunky Munkey in the afternoon...
sounds great...
~ hugs from chunky chipmunky

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

Tracey
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11 posted 2002-08-19 09:56 PM


Okay, just so long as you don’t make me eat the ice cream WITH the pringles…some things just aren’t meant to go together!! Lol. Though, if you’ll pass me a beer…and give me the tv clicker…I’m all yours baby!!

You can never win or lose
If you don't
Run the race

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Midnitesun
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12 posted 2002-08-20 12:20 PM


Chunky monkey ice cream vodka floats???
What a disgusting combo!
But a day off just for fun sounds great!
Now, please pass the Pringles, and a St Pauli Girl beer.

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13 posted 2002-09-02 09:36 AM


it's good to know that there are folks like you out there
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Tamarac Fla
14 posted 2002-09-02 10:42 AM


Duncan
Cute, enjoyed the read.

Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
15 posted 2002-09-02 12:38 PM


Duncan - you romantic you, just lovely. Chunky Monkey ice cream huh? H'mmm, never thought of that one...

BC

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16 posted 2002-09-03 11:47 AM


Duncan,
Read this yesterday...and woke up this morning, still thinking about the last lines.  I belive this one deserves a bump for more to read.  Enjoyed it much.
Joanna

What better way to become immortal than to wake up each day and write?   Ray Bradbury



WhiteRose
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17 posted 2002-09-04 01:56 PM


Okay, just need directions now and I'll be right over. This is delightful.

The White Rose~
A simple expression
of classic beauty.

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