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Love Is Just Like Lemonade

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Neeraja
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0 posted 08-19-2002 01:13 PM       View Profile for Neeraja   Email Neeraja   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Neeraja

Lemonade…
Sweet… sparkling
bright and fresh
with a touch of sour
but sometimes bitter
and when you spoil it
it makes a sticky mess

love is not much different
sweet… sparkling
bright and fresh
the same touch of sour
sometimes bitter
and when you spoil it
it also makes a mess

Still there is a difference
lemonade must be cold
to be liked a lot
while love…
on the other hand
well….
I like that HOT!!!


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very cute indeed, very creative.
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Neeraja
A delight to read and a good write.
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(smiles) Oh Neeraja, this is soooooo beautiful, I love it, you always write such wonderful poetry that makes me smile or cry, this is gorgeous, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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Neeraja - I never looked at lemonade like this. Hot is nice though...

BC
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Neeraja!  You've left me smiling!
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smile... you all must be very thirsty!!!

Thanks for your comments!!!  

Neeraja
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Neeraja~
LOL ... just too cute~
I'll bet they'd all flock to your Lovemonade Stand !!
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

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Me too...Cold beer and hot women...James
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HOT! Yes!
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enjoyed

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