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Neeraja
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0 posted 2002-08-19 01:13 PM


Lemonade…
Sweet… sparkling
bright and fresh
with a touch of sour
but sometimes bitter
and when you spoil it
it makes a sticky mess

love is not much different
sweet… sparkling
bright and fresh
the same touch of sour
sometimes bitter
and when you spoil it
it also makes a mess

Still there is a difference
lemonade must be cold
to be liked a lot
while love…
on the other hand
well….
I like that HOT!!!


Copyright © August 19/2002 Neeraja Wittebrood





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passing shadows
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1 posted 2002-08-19 01:15 PM


very cute indeed, very creative.
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2 posted 2002-08-19 01:27 PM


Neeraja
A delight to read and a good write.

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3 posted 2002-08-19 01:29 PM




(smiles) Oh Neeraja, this is soooooo beautiful, I love it, you always write such wonderful poetry that makes me smile or cry, this is gorgeous, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Bill Charles
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4 posted 2002-08-19 01:41 PM


Neeraja - I never looked at lemonade like this. Hot is nice though...

BC

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5 posted 2002-08-19 02:24 PM



Neeraja!  You've left me smiling!

Neeraja
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6 posted 2002-08-19 02:29 PM


smile... you all must be very thirsty!!!

Thanks for your comments!!!  

Neeraja

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7 posted 2002-08-19 06:01 PM


Neeraja~
LOL ... just too cute~
I'll bet they'd all flock to your Lovemonade Stand !!
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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JamesMichael
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8 posted 2002-11-19 03:39 AM


Me too...Cold beer and hot women...James
passing shadows
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9 posted 2002-12-30 03:00 PM


HOT! Yes!
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10 posted 2007-11-11 01:18 PM


enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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