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Sven
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0 posted 2002-08-18 10:57 PM


a Sunday morning breeze
          enters Venetia
                         blind
      stirring the quiet
                with eddys of white
touching the skin
                    with hands of clouds
        silently singing
                         a whispered angelsong
                                       (dawn's music)

we could wake
             to this dream
         but, all we do
                      is roll over

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

© Copyright 2002 John Garcia - All Rights Reserved
Mistletoe Angel
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1 posted 2002-08-18 11:10 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh John, I have missed you so so much these past few days, this is beautiful and sometimes I think many of us take this beauty for granted when we could be supporting the grace and light we share with Him! (sigh) This is a wonderful message of awareness, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sven, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (08-18-2002 11:11 PM).]

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2 posted 2002-08-18 11:17 PM


Sven..my friend with the golden pen...
You have done it again!
This gave me goosebumps amd left me speechless..but smiling.
Wonderful words and presentation!
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

CSKpoet
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3 posted 2002-08-19 05:04 AM


I did roll over this morning, but found this gem late Sunday evening...what a delight to read your poems again, Sven!
aloha, Cher

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

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4 posted 2002-08-19 05:11 AM


wow, I haven't had a Sunday morning like that in forever! I work nights...bummer. Nice poem to remind me.
catalinamoon
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5 posted 2002-08-19 07:03 AM


Ah, what a loely thing to read on MONDAY morning.
Sandra

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6 posted 2002-08-19 11:34 AM


enjoy
Bill Charles
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7 posted 2002-08-19 11:37 AM


Sven - we do roll over, but the question is to whomever we roll over to... Love your writings Sven...

BC

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8 posted 2002-08-19 12:21 PM



To enter Venetia
blind
on a Sunday morn
by breeze

is a good thing...

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9 posted 2002-08-28 11:03 PM


You're lovable, ya know that?

This is just too beautiful for words. You've melted me again.

I will not bend to the cowardice of a silent judgement.

Earth Angel
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10 posted 2002-08-28 11:23 PM


Kodak moment captured forever with your words.

Love, Light & Laughter
Linda

Janette
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11 posted 2002-08-29 01:27 AM


Reading your words caused me to think ... and then just ... *sigh*
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12 posted 2002-08-29 12:47 PM


Sven....I like this. Bob
walker
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13 posted 2002-08-29 02:08 PM


I love it, this is a keeper. I love Sunday morning, they can be so cozy.

[This message has been edited by walker (08-29-2002 02:08 PM).]

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14 posted 2002-08-29 02:16 PM


This makes me think of all the wonderful Sunday mornings I've wasted. **sigh** I'll think twice before I roll over next Sunday.
Peace,love,light and happiness
TAmmy

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15 posted 2002-08-29 05:07 PM


Oh that sleep sounds so good right now, Sven....
and you've captured that lazy Sunday morning feeling... perfectly
~ hugs from a sleepy chipmunk

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

Kethry
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16 posted 2002-08-29 06:20 PM


What a gem to wake up to.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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17 posted 2002-09-02 12:31 PM


You just don't post enough anymore. Geesh..are you hiding? *sigh* Well..this is the best way to keep you read.
loving this lots and lots, Sweet Poet Man.

*jenn*

"two hearts will build the foundation for one point of light
a duet done with passion"

excerpt from "I Love You"

Sven
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18 posted 2002-09-02 09:17 PM


thank you everyone. . . it's nice to be read. . . and, I know that I don't get around here like I used to. . . but, I'm still here. . . thanks. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Irie
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19 posted 2002-09-20 05:56 PM


So true! I think I will wake tomorrow with a different view.

Thanks Sven!
Good reading you again. I don't get around here as often
as I used to either.
My muse has left me!!!
Hugs

~Sheri

"Don't wait for your ship to come in ...
Swim out to it"

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20 posted 2002-09-20 06:14 PM


Sven,
I know exactly the moment of which you speak.
But how did you upset the nestle of calm
long enough to find a pen and write it down, man?

JamesMichael
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21 posted 2002-09-22 10:43 PM


Fabulous Sven...James
Sven
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22 posted 2002-09-22 11:04 PM


Sheri, I'm sure that if you look hard enough, you'll find it. . . good to see you again my friend. . .

Mikey, I just kept it all in my head, and wrote it down later. . .

James, thank you my friend. . .

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