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Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2002-08-18 02:56 PM

Liken these words to the beat of
a soul bound by reason and faith
For...in faith of words shall I live
each moment of you....

The morn brings to your eyes
the brightness of energies light.
the softness of Willow’s night
the touch of stars..

Liken the strum of heart to the lyre
of tune, the dance of moon,
the Ball upon midnight strike...

With this whispering wish...a kiss,
a touch which rises the fire of glow.
An ember sparked by your breath
while outside....fireflies dance
an endless courtship.

Listen...hear the silent breath of
love lying close....touching...
Feel the beat of mortal heart expound
that thee art most loved...

Dew caresses the leaves in soft shades
of green.....as eyes gaze...in wander.
Searching for the ring of one’s desire
till time stretches the imagined limit
of a universe....beyond the light of
stars in blaze....

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2002-08-18 03:06 PM

Barry...this reads like a rhapsody!
Gentle as a whisper in my ear...love it!
Beautifully penned.
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
So you won't ever forget me ~

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-08-18 03:56 PM

(smiles) Oh Barry, this is sooooooo lovely, I love it, you always bring such light to the stars and beyond with your words! (big hugggssssss) May this rhapsody of paradise always fill your heart, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

3 posted 2002-08-18 05:47 PM

superb, this feels like a gentle dance to soothing, romantic music where all around becomes invisible to these two dancers...

lovely

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

4 posted 2002-08-18 06:18 PM

Dew caresses the leaves in soft shades
of green.....as eyes gaze...in wander.
Searching for the ring of one’s desire
till time stretches the imagined limit
of a universe....beyond the light of
stars in blaze....

This is absolutely gorgeous, Barry. I loved all of it but I loved this last part best...
it was like reading the icing on a wonderful piece of cake...
and I love icing.

~ yummy hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

5 posted 2002-08-18 06:28 PM

Magnus,
Is that all you have to do all day is sit around and write romantic poems? Well done Barry.

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

6 posted 2002-08-19 06:01 AM

Dew caresses the leaves in soft shades
of green.....as eyes gaze...in wander.
Searching for the ring of one’s desire
till time stretches the imagined limit
of a universe....beyond the light of
stars in blaze....

This sounds like a wonderful rhapsody to me Barry. Well done. *s*

somebody tell me, please help me....
understand.......(as sung by Trace Adkins)

{on the wings of words are spirits fly...and our souls are free~me

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

7 posted 2002-08-19 06:37 AM

Barry you have achieved the impossible, made me feel hopeful for a happy day.
Amazing.
Thanks.
Sandra

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