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secretlife
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Grean Earth ,,,

0 posted 2002-08-18 02:52 AM


It’s a deal between us......
Never talk together for one week...
To know how much u will miss me...
Testing my self how can I live a way from you..
I know honey its hard for us...
But lets test our self...If we can be so far..
One week...I will not hear your voice... your kind words....

Yes its One-week...
But it will be much easier for me...Do you know why?
Because I will start dreaming about u...
Your voice it is saved in my heart...I can hear u talking to me....That’s why it will be easier for me my love....
One week from now....
We will keep thinking together...
For one week..........


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Magnus
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1 posted 2002-08-18 10:24 AM


I like the concept of this,  but I am not
sure my mouth could stay zipped that long.
Or my fingers on this keyboard....  

Cute thought...

Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2002-08-18 10:28 AM


secretlife
A strange request.

Night Shadow
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3 posted 2002-08-19 12:46 PM


Crazy Strange Idea, hope that ull can keep on till last day, cuz i think he'll cant stay away that much.

Hope u the best

Night Shadow

secretlife
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Grean Earth ,,,
4 posted 2002-08-20 12:15 PM


I dont think that its a strange idea dear Night Shadow,, sorry for saying that but u dont know what I mean of doing that,,,,there is a reason but its secret I cant tell u its adeal between me and my self.........

I know guys that Iam abit strange.......


Secretlife,,
(Easy come,,Easy go)


Magician
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5 posted 2002-08-20 09:01 AM


Wow, the ache....
captured so eloquently.

The Nexious
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6 posted 2002-08-21 08:45 PM


wooow....
thats a great idea....is it 4 real???

The Nexious
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7 posted 2002-08-21 08:45 PM


wooow....
thats a great idea....is it 4 real???

Be WARE...

Mistletoe Angel
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8 posted 2002-08-21 10:29 PM




(sigh) This is wonderful, I hope soon you have the courage to speak of your love and together you share true happiness always, I love this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

SimplyGold
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9 posted 2002-08-24 08:27 AM


Actually, I think this is a splendid concept.
Distance does make the heart grow fonder. To have this kind of self control will serve to built passion and desire. I can imagine the exploision when love then meets!

Thanks for the idea!


Bill Charles
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10 posted 2002-08-24 10:12 AM


secretlife - it's very difficult to not speak to each other for even one week. Very nice write...

BC

secretlife
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Grean Earth ,,,
11 posted 2002-08-24 11:59 PM


Thank you all for your opinion, I know it was a strange idea,, any way I want you all to know that I broke the deal.... We just didn’t talk for 3 days and I broke it coz I knew now that I cant live without talking to him...
Got it dear Bill Charles............


Thanx alot
Secretlife,
(Easy come,,Easy go)


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