My husband’s morning walk

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Open Poetry #22

My husband’s morning walk

chitsank
Member

since 2002-08-13

Posts 88

0 posted 2002-08-17 11:43 PM

The doctors advised my spouse
If his weight were to reduce,
Morning walk was inevitable
Which made my husband grumble.

To me it was such a big task
Why is it so, you may all ask
For waking him in the morning was an ordeal,
So, his morning walks were never to become real.

Will my husband’s morning walk ever happen!
This thought my spirits did dampen.
My husband’s morning walk,It did seem
Will happen only in my wildest dream.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

1 posted 2002-08-18 12:13 PM

And...surely this is frustrating...but so
many of us have something that they should
be doing...and don't.... Good Luck!

chitsank
Member

since 2002-08-13

Posts 88

2 posted 2002-08-18 04:01 AM

Thanx magnus,for reading and commenting.

Miah
Senior Member

since 2002-08-26

Posts 1062
Pennsylvania

3 posted 2002-09-21 12:41 PM

I been meaning to go for my afternoon walk, even bought a tread mill, figured I would see it and use it. Never did. but it's a lovely coat rack now.

Cool poem.

chitsank
Member

since 2002-08-13

Posts 88

4 posted 2002-09-22 01:05 AM

Thanx miah, for ur remarks and sharing ur view.

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