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Suetang
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0 posted 2002-08-17 06:14 PM


Come and lay down here beside me
And be a part of my wonderful dream
I'll take you to so many places
With so much love you've ever seen

We'll travel the far horizons
And plunge into the deepest sea
Upon the waves of our desire
Our spirits will be set free

We'll climb the peaks of passion
To reach the summit of our love
Then we'll lay amongst the wildflowers
And watch the birds soar high above

I'll kiss you beneath the moonlight
To the sound of our heart's tune
Letting love take us even higher
As we're transported to the moon

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

© Copyright 2002 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
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By the sea
1 posted 2002-08-17 06:29 PM


I like the passion in this one, Sue, and it's so good to see you.
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2 posted 2002-08-17 06:31 PM


enjoyed
Kethry
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3 posted 2002-08-17 07:16 PM


Sue,
you always write with such passion for words and this is no exception.
Write on
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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4 posted 2002-08-17 07:35 PM


A 'red hot' poem my friend.

If you get to the moon, please pick me up a small rock and send a postcard. Oh, and you might want to stake out a garden spot.  :-)

Great passion in these words; I liked it so much.

Hugs, Marti


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5 posted 2002-08-17 07:51 PM




(smiles) Oh Sue, this is beautiful, sweet friend, your words of romance always make me smile, may your love always fill your dreams and rest in their eternal blankets! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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6 posted 2002-08-17 08:58 PM


SueTang~
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww !
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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7 posted 2002-08-18 10:11 AM


Put the rockets in place and fly....

Nicely done Sue T.  

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